If I were to choose a book, and what I desired was a reading experience filled with more poorly written sex scenes rather than a captivating story, then perhaps "Fifty Shades" would have been my choice. However, in this particular case, the story line had the potential to be truly awesome. It seemed to hold great promise and had the makings of an engaging narrative.

But unfortunately, I had no real chance to fully enjoy it. Why? Because it felt as if every third line was dedicated to sex. It was just sex, sex, sex, one after another. It became so overwhelming and constant that it really took away from the overall enjoyment of the story. For God's sake, couldn't there have been a bit more balance? Couldn't we have had some breathing room between all these explicit scenes? It really made it difficult to focus on the other aspects of the story that might have been truly interesting.

I just wish there had been a better blend of story and the more steamy elements, so that I could have had a more fulfilling reading experience. As it stands, it was just too much of one thing and not enough of the other.

This was extremely good. I completely adored Jack Davidson. What a fantastically well-written character he was.

I also had a great fondness for the four BFFs. Since I began this series from book 2, I am most definitely going to have to go back and read the very first one, The Pregnancy Test. I'm eager to see how Caroline and Brad met and how their romance blossomed.

I truly hope that Beckwith Tripp (the cross-dressing psychic) makes an appearance in the other books within the series. He/she was an absolute hoot and added so much fun and entertainment to the story.

The way the author has crafted these characters and their relationships is truly remarkable. It makes me excited to explore more of this series and discover what other adventures and romances await.

I can't wait to see how the story continues to unfold and how all the characters develop and grow. This series has definitely captured my attention and I'm looking forward to reading more.

4-sexy-stars

Jack is just yummy, no?

He has this charm that is simply irresistible. His smile can light up a room and make anyone's heart skip a beat. The way he carries himself, with confidence and a hint of mystery, adds to his allure. In the picture, he looks absolutely stunning. The image shows him in a pose that accentuates his good looks. His eyes seem to hold a story that one would love to discover. The photo is of high quality, with vibrant colors and sharp details. It truly captures his essence and makes one want to know more about him. 4-sexy-stars

What I like about it:

Firstly, the sensuality in the writing is truly captivating. It adds a layer of allure and charm to the story, making it more engaging and interesting. Secondly, the character of Beckwith is well-developed and intriguing. His presence in the story brings a sense of mystery and excitement.

What I disliked about it:

However, there are several aspects that I didn't like. For instance, the description of Jamie as "a poster for naïve white girl" is rather inappropriate. Adding "white" as if it's synonymous with innocent is a form of stereotyping. Moreover, the grandfather's sexual harassment being laughed off by the hero is unacceptable. It shows a lack of respect and sensitivity towards such a serious issue.

Another issue is the abrupt change in POV from one character to the next. The chapters and paragraphs feel chopped off, which disrupts the flow of the story. Additionally, the heroine's indecisiveness is taken to an extreme. She seems to make a decision in one chapter and then reconsider it again in the next, as if she has Alzheimer's.

Furthermore, there is little to no conflict in the story. There was a huge missed opportunity to introduce Beckwith to Jack earlier and have him express his doubts about Jamie's relationship with Jack. Also, the conflict between Jack's occupation and his wealth, which doesn't sit well with Jamie, is never properly addressed. Instead, it gets resolved immediately without any real exploration.

Finally, there is no resolution for why Caroline was not supposed to marry her husband. This loose end leaves the reader with a sense of dissatisfaction and unanswered questions.

I've been delving deep into the works of Erin McCarthy lately. I'm completely smitten with this series. The concept of the girls having their fortunes read by the crossdresser Beckwith is truly captivating.

OMG, their first date was简直令人惊叹且浪漫至极。11个小时的畅谈，然后是一轮轮热烈的性爱。不得不说，杰克有点过于主动了，他亲吻她的方式以及其他举动。但后来杰米心里想他是如此温柔的情人时，我又感到很惊讶。

除了杰克抚摸杰米或打量她的方式让我觉得不太尊重（也许是我内心的女权主义在作祟？我不知道），我其实还挺喜欢他的。我从杰米身上感受到了强烈的双鱼座特质，而且当时正好是双鱼座季节，这就更合适了。

天啊，如果杰克为了她放弃所有的钱，我肯定会很生气的。幸运的是，他没有那样做。我是说，拜托，那太蠢了。而且幸运的是，杰米实际上也不希望他那样做。但我担心他会因为杰米没有给他开绿灯而把他的数百万美元都当作“大动作”放弃。是的，另一件让我恼火的事情是，杰米在书中有一半的时间都在抗拒对杰克的感情，并告诉他他们不能在一起。说实话，如果说他们的关系有敌人的话，那可能就是杰米。

有人能告诉我他们的船名吗？因为我不知道，他们俩都叫J。杰米和杰克，JJ。

我其实不太喜欢奥斯汀，有点希望杰克最后不要决定收养他……唉，你和杰米甚至还没结婚，总有一天会有自己的孩子。这个烦人的13岁男孩不太合适，会让事情变得复杂。

不过我真的很喜欢爷爷波普斯这个角色。杰米和她爸爸之间到底发生了什么？我觉得那件事没有完全解决。

对我来说，结局也可以再好一点。还有，我想知道如果贝克威思没看错的话，卡罗琳和她的婚姻会怎么样！

我打算读系列中的第三本，也是最后一本。希望我能记得！

Well, the blurb really gives a good overview. Contemporary romance isn't my top favorite genre. However, Erin McCarthy writes it in a way that suits me. Her stories are filled with humor and entertaining characters. There isn't an excessive amount of angst and misunderstandings. Instead, it's just a great story with characters that you instantly fall for. I really liked both of the main characters. I could understand their motives and actions, which made me eager to find out what would happen next.

Jamie is a social worker who adores her job and helping others. She isn't actively seeking the love of her life. But when her psychic friend tells her that she will meet him soon, she wholeheartedly believes it and decides to go for it. Even though she has been warned that he comes with a big lie, and she despises liars.

Jonathon/Jack made a fortune in the stock market but has now left that crazy life behind. His family is very dissatisfied with his decision, especially since they keep expecting handouts. With his grandfather recovering from an illness, Jack has taken over running his charity organization, and he enjoys the work. It's only part-time, and he is trying to figure out what he wants to do with the rest of his life. After all, he is only in his 30s. And then he sees Jamie and is completely stunned and in lust.
I thoroughly enjoyed witnessing this courtship and all the fun moments in it. I highly recommend Erin McCarthy's books if you're in the mood for something enjoyable and light that will leave you smiling when you close the book.
9 stars.
© 2014 Reviews by Aurian

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This simple yet powerful statement sums up the overall experience. It expresses a deep sense of satisfaction and gratitude for something that has exceeded expectations. Whether it's a book, a movie, a song, or a person, when we say "loved it! just what I needed," we are acknowledging the positive impact that it has had on our lives. It has filled a void, brought a smile to our faces, and made us feel truly alive.

I must admit that I did not manage to get past the first 10 chapters of this book.

To be honest, I simply did not enjoy the story at all. It seemed rather dull and uninteresting, lacking the excitement and engaging elements that would have kept me hooked.

Moreover, the characters failed to make an impression on me. They felt flat and one-dimensional, lacking depth and complexity. I couldn't seem to connect with them on any level, which made it difficult for me to invest in their journey.

Finally, the style of writing also did not appeal to me. It was perhaps a bit too dry and academic for my taste, lacking the fluidity and grace that I look for in a good piece of literature.

All in all, this was not a book that I would recommend to others.

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Holy crap was this book hot!

I must admit, Erin McCarthy has an uncanny knack for writing women who are relatable and men I would want to fall in love with. It's truly remarkable how she brings these characters to life.

Wow. I can't wait to see what she does with the next installment in this series. There are so many possibilities.

Hopefully something with Allison or Caroline. I have this feeling that Caroline will not be with her husband for long, especially after what the crazy cross-dressing psychic says.

The anticipation is killing me. I'm eager to see how the story unfolds and what new adventures and romances await the characters.

Erin McCarthy has definitely hooked me with this series, and I'm looking forward to more.

Sweet, cute, funny and lighthearted - this is what you'll get when you pick up this book. It's a great quick read that will surely bring a smile to your face.

However, if you're someone who is seeking depth and complex, involved plots, then perhaps this might not be the right choice for you. Maybe you should look elsewhere for a more intellectually stimulating read.

Now, let's talk about my favorite part. Hehe, it has to be Jack's *ahem* assistance with the bridesmaid dress. It was just so hilarious and added a touch of fun to the story.

I'd also like to take a moment to express my extreme frustration. Due to the fact that McCarthy has changed publishers, she is unfortunately not legally allowed to write the last 2 books in this series. Bloody bureaucrats and their red tape! It's really a shame as I was looking forward to seeing how the story would conclude.

This was the very first book that I have ever read by this particular author.

Interestingly enough, I managed to stumble upon this book at a garage sale for a mere fifty cents. Woohoo! What a bargain!

The reading experience was quite effortless and swift. Overall, it was mostly an enjoyable read. I truly relished the lively banter that took place between the characters. However, there were moments when there seemed to be an excessive amount of talking. They would chatter on and on even when it was inappropriate or unnecessary, if you understand what I mean.

There were a couple of lines that really made me cringe. For instance, during a steamy scene, one character said, "Do you appreciate me in a Social Worker kind of way?" Seriously, who in the world would say that while engaged in such an act?

Also, it's important to note that a Social Worker is strictly prohibited from having any kind of personal relationship outside of a professional working relationship with clients. So, the fact that a teenager client went home to live with the Social Worker's boyfriend is a huge no-no.

Despite all these flaws, I still liked the book overall. Moreover, I'm glad that it had a Happily Ever After (HEA) ending.