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Prose style: 2
Plot : 2
Depth of characters: 2
Overall sense of aesthetic: 1
Originality: 3
Entertaining: 1
Emotional Reaction: 1
Intellectual Stimulation: 3
Social Relevance: 2
Writerly Inspiration: 1
Average = 1.8
I think this suffers from one basic writerly technique; describe what something is, not what something is like. If there were characters, a story or some kind of dramatic tension in this pile of high brow prattle, it was buried underneath the weight of endless adjectives and billowy sentences. I began to really affirm my position that a large vocabulary doesn't add up to tremendous writing. In fact the two are almost mutually exclusive. There are many fantastic works of literature that draw from an incredible amount and complexity of words; Lolita, Infinite Jest, Absalom, Absalom!(okay, sure debatable).
But as Papa Ernest proved time and time again "big words don't mean big emotions!" That being said, I think it is important to expand your vocabulary so that you have more options to choose from. I don't think one should use large words for the sake of themselves. One should carefully pick so as to make the perfect turn of phrase in that specific dramatic moment. Or your vocabulary is so big and your brain so large that you can write in any style, genre or situation!
The Sea isn't great literature. This is an author desperately trying to write great literature.
The book follows a man dealing with a traumatic loss and it jumps from time to time to simulate a man sifting through his memory to make sense of it all. Despite this justification of extreme leaps in time, it didn't bring me into the story at all. Instead it pushed me away. I had so little to grab onto. Maybe that was the point; to simulate the constant ethereal of water in the ocean. But again, it didn't make me feel anything for the characters or the plot lines.
I'm not done with Banville. I'm reading The Book of Evidence very soon. I've heard great things about it and I'm excited for it.
I was utterly disappointed by this one after all the gushing reviews of Banville's work. Oh well, off to bigger and better things!
Plot : 2
Depth of characters: 2
Overall sense of aesthetic: 1
Originality: 3
Entertaining: 1
Emotional Reaction: 1
Intellectual Stimulation: 3
Social Relevance: 2
Writerly Inspiration: 1
Average = 1.8
I think this suffers from one basic writerly technique; describe what something is, not what something is like. If there were characters, a story or some kind of dramatic tension in this pile of high brow prattle, it was buried underneath the weight of endless adjectives and billowy sentences. I began to really affirm my position that a large vocabulary doesn't add up to tremendous writing. In fact the two are almost mutually exclusive. There are many fantastic works of literature that draw from an incredible amount and complexity of words; Lolita, Infinite Jest, Absalom, Absalom!(okay, sure debatable).
But as Papa Ernest proved time and time again "big words don't mean big emotions!" That being said, I think it is important to expand your vocabulary so that you have more options to choose from. I don't think one should use large words for the sake of themselves. One should carefully pick so as to make the perfect turn of phrase in that specific dramatic moment. Or your vocabulary is so big and your brain so large that you can write in any style, genre or situation!
The Sea isn't great literature. This is an author desperately trying to write great literature.
The book follows a man dealing with a traumatic loss and it jumps from time to time to simulate a man sifting through his memory to make sense of it all. Despite this justification of extreme leaps in time, it didn't bring me into the story at all. Instead it pushed me away. I had so little to grab onto. Maybe that was the point; to simulate the constant ethereal of water in the ocean. But again, it didn't make me feel anything for the characters or the plot lines.
I'm not done with Banville. I'm reading The Book of Evidence very soon. I've heard great things about it and I'm excited for it.
I was utterly disappointed by this one after all the gushing reviews of Banville's work. Oh well, off to bigger and better things!