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I am no longer friends with the person who made me read this and kind of threatened me into being only nice about it so I can finally say it.
It's bad.
Maybe it's because I didn't read the first one (since this seems to be the second of a series) but even for a YA I found it stupidly childish and simplistic and honestly kind of offensive towards Asia. The description of India as some barbaric dumpster with poor brown folk is terrible, and the cliched and stereotyped descriptions of "mystical" and "spiritual" stuff were irritating. I really thought these descriptions of "exotic" calm Asian people who ponder philosophy over grains of rice and ponds of koi fish while wearing mystical robes was over but this book is fairly recent.
As I said, this is marketed as YA, but the writing is too simplistic and childish for YA, it's like reading a book meant for middle schoolers, but with themes that might not be appropriate for that age. I doubt this is an issue with the writer because I have read enough from Isabel Allende to know she doesn't write like a 12-year-old, which makes me think she thought she had to dumb down her writing for a younger audience, or maybe her quality has been declining over the years, who knows.
The plot doesn't make much sense, and there are a lot of inconsistencies because I mean why research a country when you can make up your own with inaccurate stereotypes! I feel like this book also tried to teach me something about spirituality and believing in myself but it it was barely scratching the surface so I don't think anyone can learn anything from this.
Also the yetis, what the fuck was that.
It's bad.
Maybe it's because I didn't read the first one (since this seems to be the second of a series) but even for a YA I found it stupidly childish and simplistic and honestly kind of offensive towards Asia. The description of India as some barbaric dumpster with poor brown folk is terrible, and the cliched and stereotyped descriptions of "mystical" and "spiritual" stuff were irritating. I really thought these descriptions of "exotic" calm Asian people who ponder philosophy over grains of rice and ponds of koi fish while wearing mystical robes was over but this book is fairly recent.
As I said, this is marketed as YA, but the writing is too simplistic and childish for YA, it's like reading a book meant for middle schoolers, but with themes that might not be appropriate for that age. I doubt this is an issue with the writer because I have read enough from Isabel Allende to know she doesn't write like a 12-year-old, which makes me think she thought she had to dumb down her writing for a younger audience, or maybe her quality has been declining over the years, who knows.
The plot doesn't make much sense, and there are a lot of inconsistencies because I mean why research a country when you can make up your own with inaccurate stereotypes! I feel like this book also tried to teach me something about spirituality and believing in myself but it it was barely scratching the surface so I don't think anyone can learn anything from this.
Also the yetis, what the fuck was that.