The Empire Trilogy #2

Servant of the Empire

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In the world of Kelewan, Mara of the Acoma has now become an expert player in the Game of the Council through bloody political maneuvering. After buying a group of Midkemian prisoners-of-war, she finds one of them—Kevin of Zūn—to be a great asset in her ongoing struggle for survival and power.

827 pages, Paperback

First published September 1,1990

This edition

Format
827 pages, Paperback
Published
January 1, 1990 by Grafton
ISBN
9780586203811
ASIN
0586203818
Language
English

About the author

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Raymond E. Feist was born Raymond E. Gonzales III, but took his adoptive step-father's surname when his mother remarried Felix E. Feist. He graduated with a B.A. in Communication Arts with Honors in 1977 from the University of California at San Diego. During that year Feist had some ideas for a novel about a boy who would be a magician. He wrote the novel two years later, and it was published in 1982 by Doubleday. Feist currently lives in San Diego with his children, where he collects fine wine, DVDs, and books on a variety of topics of personal interest: wine, biographies, history, and, especially, the history of American Professional Football.

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July 15,2025
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DNF at 7%

I was initially inclined to give this book more of a chance. However, based on what I've gathered so far, it doesn't seem to be worth it.



To start with, the original premise of Mara devising plans to deal with the Minwanabi clan is quite good. It makes perfect sense that a rising clan led by a clever yet largely untested young widow would be targeted by a rival clan with unpredictable tendencies due to a recent succession. Other clans will stand by and observe, and allegiances may change. So far, so good.



The portrayal of the Midkemians, though, is something I simply cannot tolerate. They are depicted as physically superior beings with no respect for Tsurani culture. They are hypermasculine, tall, and muscular Caucasian stand-ins who bring enlightenment to the short-statured, rigid, and honor-obsessed East Asian stand-ins.



It is hypocritical when Kevin (such a creative name!), a Midkemian war prisoner, begins to lecture on dignity and the meaning of life while simultaneously shitting on his interlocutor's culture and slut-shaming her for wearing a liberal dress code, implying unwanted sexual advances.



And this doesn't even take into account the Midkemians' own form of slavery. It's just putrid, vile sanctimony.



After just around 50 pages, it's already featuring a cocktail of tropes that I absolutely detest: cultural posturing, Orientalism, toxic masculinity, and slut shaming. And from what I've learned, this won't be subverted or averted for the next 650 pages or so. It's just a White dude disrespecting, gaslighting, and insulting his Asian love interest.



It's a great shame because I really wanted to read Janny Wurts' works. I suppose I'll have to look into her other personal works instead.

July 15,2025
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The machinations of the Great Game persist unabated. The power-hungry Lords are engaged in a fierce struggle for supremacy. Their ambitions know no bounds as they scheme and plot to gain the upper hand. Meanwhile, the Empire finds itself on the brink of an unprecedented change. This change looms large and menacing, threatening to send everything spiraling into chaos.

In this tumultuous landscape, two distinct worlds and cultures collide. The clash is a complex web of politics, filled with intrigue and deception. Amidst the turmoil, love also finds its way in. It adds yet another layer of complication to the already convoluted situation. The characters are caught in a storm of emotions and loyalties, forced to make difficult choices that will shape their fates and the future of the Empire.

The story unfolds, revealing the hidden motives and secret alliances that drive the actions of the characters. As the Great Game continues to play out, the outcome remains uncertain, leaving the reader on the edge of their seat, eager to discover what lies ahead.
July 15,2025
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2 and a bit stars rounded up.


'When you play the game of thrones empire, you win or you die.'


After pulling her house back from the brink of destruction, Mara, the ruling lady of the Acoma, is now focused on building up the power of her house. She hopes to win the blood feud with the Minwanabi family, who wants her and her young son dead. However, the plot of this book, which clocks in at over 800 pages (300 more than the first), feels meandering and unfocused. Instead of simply surviving and rebuilding, Mara gets enmeshed in the politics of the Great Game for somewhat unclear reasons. There are potential allies she could have made an alliance with more easily, but she chooses a more convoluted path.


I also lost sympathy for Mara due to some of her actions in this book, which I won't detail here. Additionally, the 'romance' between Mara and her 'barbarian slave' Kevin irritated me. It took up a lot of space and was filled with trite cliches. Kevin's constant comparisons of his homeland to the Empire and his brash behavior according to Empire standards became tiresome. I even wished Mara would punish him severely.


Feist and Wurts are talented writers, but this book seems a bit too indulgent. A tighter edit and a clearer focus could have improved it. The villains in the book are also one-dimensional caricatures, which detracts from the story. I will read the third book, but not right away as I need a break from the Empire of Kelewan.

July 15,2025
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Wow. I mean WOW!

The second installment of The Empire Trilogy was truly remarkable. It surpassed the first book in so many ways.

This series has the potential to end up as one of the top 10 of all time for me.

Mara, the main character, is definitely a top 10 character.

From the very beginning to the end of this book, I couldn't think of a single thing that I didn't enjoy.

Every page was filled with excitement, adventure, and complex characters.

The story was engaging and kept me on the edge of my seat.

The writing was excellent, with vivid descriptions and a great sense of pacing.

I can't wait to see what happens in the final installment of the trilogy.

Simply wow!
July 15,2025
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This was yet another captivating story, albeit distinct from the first book in several remarkable aspects.

Regrettably, I personally found the departures rather jarring, which slightly diminished my enjoyment. However, they also more closely resembled the form of the original Riftwar books, making them somewhat understandable. It perhaps indicates a greater involvement by Feist compared to the first volume.

The focus remains on Mara as she copes with the aftermath, both positive and negative, of the previous book. It also introduces a Midkemian slave, Kevin, who assumes a very prominent position as the house navigates political and military conflicts.

Kevin's presence as an outsider allows the authors to use him instead of Mara to explain what's happening in Tsurani politics, as Mara is presumably mostly an expert by now. Yet, he also plays a significant and active role in the story, so the conceit is not a concern. The point of view in the story alternates between him and Mara, often without much indication beyond the context, but it's mostly done well and sensibly. For example, when we need to stay with Kevin while Mara is formulating a secret plot. Battles, both personal and at the army level, occur more frequently and in greater detail than in the previous book, suggesting to me that Feist had a greater hand in writing this volume. These additions are not unwelcome, although two others that I attribute to him were not as entertaining for me.

Firstly, the point of view jumps to the first advisor in the Minwanabi household, Mara's sworn enemies. I thought the first book stood on its own quite well without the need for such jumps. Apart from one intriguing point early in the story, the switching added very little. It may have been done to highlight certain flawed traits of the other house, but I felt it was excessive.

Secondly, time jumps occur much more frequently in this book as well. Often, turning a page would result in six months passing, and sometimes it was concerning, especially since Mara's child is present, and he grows significantly during that period. The story never goes off the rails as a result, and the timing makes sense, but I couldn't help but feel that there were significant events and developments that were "skipped" by fast-forwarding through so much time, even though that's clearly impossible.

The final complaint I have pertains to the end of the book. Kevin's arc, in my opinion, was concluded very abruptly with no real resolution. Perhaps this was intentional to put us in the same mindset as Mara, but given the amount of time and attention devoted to him throughout the rest of the story, the cursory dismissal seemed like a waste.

However, my three complaints are more in the nature of personal preferences rather than actual problems with the story. It's still an excellent read, with all of the same genuine emotion, engaging characters, and intense conflict that characterized the first book; real interpersonal, political, and military conflict, written skillfully, without being overly grim and hopeless.
July 15,2025
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A HUGE disappointment compared to "Daughter of the Empire."

For the first third of the novel, Mara does absolutely nothing except moon over the forbidden love she has with a barbarian slave. It's truly frustrating to see her character so consumed by this one-sided and rather uninteresting aspect.

It reads like a bad romance novel, "swelling groin" included. The language and descriptions seem out of place and overly simplistic, lacking the depth and complexity that made "Daughter of the Empire" so captivating.

One has to wonder if the same authors of "Daughter of the Empire" were really involved in this. The quality and style are so drastically different that it's hard to believe it's the work of the same minds.

Perhaps they were influenced by something else or were trying to take the story in a new direction, but unfortunately, it just doesn't work.

Overall, this novel is a letdown and fails to live up to the expectations set by its predecessor.
July 15,2025
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I will admit that I wasn't a huge enthusiast of the Riftwar Saga. It did make quite an impact when it was first released, but there were parts of it that left me dissatisfied, and I never felt the urge to go back and reread it.

However, on a recommendation, I read Daughter of the Empire. I can't quite remember if it was shortly before or after that time, but it truly lived up to the hype. DotE is an excellent and highly recommended book. I regret that it has taken me literally decades to return to it, but I finally have, and the second book has met my memories of the first.

Mara is a maverick, a leader in a very traditional society who isn't afraid of change. She has bent the rules in the past, and now she delves into actually questioning the values of her society. Slaves from Midkemia (the main setting of the main series) were initially popular exotics, but their alien values and general stubbornness have made them less prized. Nevertheless, Mara ends up purchasing a large number of them for her understaffed estates. It's clear from the start that they are exceptional, as they are organized in a way that disrupts the ordinary way of doing things (such as selling off clothes as they are being distributed and then complaining that the allotment was short).

This is mainly because they are ably led by an intelligent and resourceful man who is determined to escape. A lot of what follows definitely owes a debt to Shogun, as Kevin ends up as a nearly co-equal central character for about three-quarters of the book. He and Mara have a passionate relationship, and she absorbs a great deal of information from him, becoming increasingly reform-minded.

Meanwhile, the politics of the Great Game continue, advancing the plot in somewhat uneven jerks. Also, some of the more dramatic events from the middle of the Riftwar saga occur during this book, with the characters here present for one of the significant ones (which was so dramatic that I have faint memories of it from the original books approximately thirty years later). The Minwanabi clan is still more powerful than the Acoma and continues to be the main source of threat.

The really nice aspect here is that, despite being the middle book of a trilogy, it stands on its own quite well. What happened in the first book is important, but you don't really need to have read it to understand this one, and where the next book is headed isn't really revealed here. This is a separate and complete book, and thus it doesn't suffer from the common "middle" problem. Additionally, the Kindle version is in very good condition, and I didn't notice any of the typical OCR-induced typos, although the formatting required a little improvement.
July 15,2025
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This fell into what I like to term the second book slump. It was good, but Mara is basically untouchable. I have the feeling that she is venturing ever further into Mary-sue territory. However, it is executed quite nicely. There aren't as many crafty political maneuvers in comparison to the first book, but it is still an entertaining read.


I wasn't too fond of the introduction of Kevin and the role that he had in the book. The further along I got, the more I kept seeing aspects of "this is a savage and uneducated culture when compared to ours". The inklings of the "western culture/ideals vs everyone else = west is best" really ruined a huge portion of the book for me. I can't recall the name of the trope, but it is one that I am not particularly fond of.


With Kevin being sent back to his homeland, I hope that the last book does not continue in this direction. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the story concludes and if it can avoid falling into the same pitfalls as this second installment. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that the author will surprise me and take the story in a new and exciting direction.
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