224 pages, Paperback
First published January 1,1997
Ok, I didn't have an extreme reaction to it. I didn't love it, nor did I hate it. I'm more of a fan of Sharon Page, Noelle Mack, and Joey W. Hill. I prefer stories that are a bit more in-your-face, the kind that make your blood run hot. When I saw the cover of Quiver (I have the one with two beautiful naked women on it, one in water and one half out), it was very appealing!! So, of course, I decided to give this book a try. Well, as I said, I didn't love it and I didn't hate it. It was very matter-of-fact. Some of the stories had good story lines and could have been developed into full-length books quite nicely. However, others felt like I was reading a sex textbook. This was my first book by Tobsha Learner. Even though it wasn't my favorite book in the world, it was definitely good enough for me to give another one a try.
It's not very well written and I found it hard to take most of the stories seriously. The language seems rather simplistic and lacks the depth and sophistication that would engage me on a deeper level. The plotlines also appear to be somewhat predictable, making it difficult to stay interested. Additionally, the characters are not well-developed, lacking in complexity and individuality. As a result, I struggle to form an emotional connection with them. While there may be some redeeming qualities, overall, the writing fails to capture my attention and hold my interest. It seems as though more effort could have been put into the writing process to create a more engaging and enjoyable piece.
ARC from NetGalley for honest review
1 Out of 5 STARS with a DNF label
Lawdy, where do I begin? Right from the start, I felt as if I was reading a report about the two characters. It was very cut and dry, lacking any emotion. Even the sex scenes were extremely... mechanical. It was like following a set of steps:
Step 1: Put hand here
Step 2: Now put it there
Step 3: Orgasm
Step 4: The next day
I understand that this is a collection of short stories and not a full-length book, so there would be very limited character development. However, some effort spent on humanizing these people would have been great. As it was, everything felt so robotic. Additionally, I have never been a fan of the "probed" terminology when discussing sex. At one point in a story, the female says she felt the clit of the girl behind her touch her back when it became erect. Uh, are you sure it was a girl? Because that's quite something.
I had high hopes for this collection, but sadly, it just didn't do it for me. **Giggle Snort** No pun intended.