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I rate this piece three stars. There is indeed some lovely writing within it. The words are crafted in a way that should, in theory, have the power to transport the reader to a specific place or time. However, despite this, I found myself not being fully engaged or "transported" as I had expected. Instead, it felt like a literary soap opera to me. The writing seemed to lean towards the overwrought and preening side. It was as if the author was trying too hard to make an impression, rather than simply telling a story that would naturally draw the reader in. As a result, it didn't leave me with a burning desire to read more. I was left with a sense of disappointment, as I had hoped for a more immersive and captivating experience. Perhaps with a bit more restraint and a focus on the essence of the story, this could have been a more enjoyable read.