Enjoyed Ariel much better. The collection of poems in Ariel is truly captivating. Take, for example, 'Insomniac'. The night is described as a sort of carbon paper, blueblack, with the much-poked periods of stars like peepholes letting in a bonewhite light, like death, behind all things. Under the gaze of the stars and the moon's rictus, the insomniac suffers on his desert pillow, with sleeplessness stretching its fine, irritating sand in all directions. The old, granular movie of memories keeps playing in his mind, exposing embarrassments from childhood and adolescence, with parental faces on tall stalks, alternately stern and tearful, and a garden of buggy rose that made him cry. His forehead is bumpy like a sack of rocks, and memories jostle each other for face-room like obsolete film stars. He is immune to pills of various colors that once lit the tedium of the protracted evening but now seem worn-out and silly, like classical gods. His head is a little interior of grey mirrors where each gesture flees down an alley of diminishing perspectives, and its significance drains away. He lives without privacy in a lidless room, with the bald slots of his eyes stiffened wide-open on the incessant heat-lightning flicker of situations. Nightlong, invisible cats howl like women or damaged instruments in the granite yard, and he can already feel daylight, his white disease, creeping up with its hatful of trivial repetitions. The city is now a map of cheerful twitters, and people with mica-silver and blank eyes are riding to work in rows, as if recently brainwashed.
'Blackberrying' is another wonderful poem. There is nobody in the lane, just blackberries on either side, mainly on the right, forming a blackberry alley that goes down in hooks, with a sea somewhere at the end heaving. The blackberries are as big as the ball of the poet's thumb and as dumb as eyes, ebon in the hedges, fat with blue-red juices that squander on the poet's fingers. The poet didn't ask for such a blood sisterhood, but the blackberries seem to love her, accommodating themselves to her milkbottle by flattening their sides. Overhead, the choughs fly in black, cacophonous flocks, like bits of burnt paper wheeling in a blown sky, their voices protesting. The poet doesn't think the sea will appear at all. The high, green meadows are glowing as if lit from within. The poet comes to a bush of berries so ripe that it is a bush of flies, hanging their bluegreen bellies and wing panes in a Chinese screen. The honey-feast of the berries has stunned them, and they believe in heaven. One more hook, and the berries and bushes end. Now the only thing to come is the sea. A sudden wind funnels at the poet from between two hills, slapping its phantom laundry in her face. These hills are too green and sweet to have tasted salt. The poet follows the sheep path between them, and a last hook brings her to the hills’ northern face, which is orange rock looking out on nothing but a great space of white and pewter lights, and a din like silversmiths beating and beating at an intractable metal.