As I'm winding down on my ambitious journey to read all of Stephen King's works, I recently took on Four Past Midnight. It's a solid collection, no doubt about it. But to be completely honest, I still have a soft spot for Skeleton Crew and Different Seasons. Now, let me share with you how I rank the stories in this collection, in my humble opinion.
The Langoliers was a pleasant surprise for me. Sci-fi horror is right up my alley, and this one hit the mark. The plot was fast-paced, the tension palpable, and the sense of isolation was enough to keep me on the edge of my seat. King's ability to create mismatched groups of characters who somehow gel together is truly remarkable, and it reminded me of some of his other masterpieces like The Mist, The Stand, and The Dark Tower series, which are among my all-time favorites. The looming dread and the eerie concept made this story stand out, earning it a well-deserved 4 stars.
The Library Policeman had me excited when I noticed a Paul Sheldon Easter egg (a shoutout to Misery, another one of my favorites). This story delved more into the supernatural, which I usually love. However, the pacing dragged a bit when a side character's backstory took center stage. It had its share of scary moments and effectively captured that childhood fear vibe, but something just didn't feel quite right. I'd give it 3.5 stars.
Secret Window, Secret Garden is a story that I really enjoyed. I'm a sucker for when King writes about authors losing their grip on reality and descending into madness, and this one did not disappoint. There's no blood and guts here, just pure psychological terror. The idea of losing control of your own mind is far scarier than any monster, and King nails it. The simplicity of the story only added to its chilling effect. I'd rate it 3.5 stars as well.
The Sun Dog had some fun connections to other King works, with mentions of Christine, Shawshank, and Cujo. Pop was delightfully creepy, but the story itself felt a bit lackluster. It had potential, but it didn't quite land for me. The body horror at the end did give it a bit of a boost, though. I'd give it 3.5 stars.
Overall, Four Past Midnight is a decent collection. But if I were to revisit it, I'd probably stick with the first two stories and skip the rest.
Having read and adored 'Full Dark, No Stars' earlier this year, I was excitedly anticipating another compilation of four Stephen King novellas. However, this time I have been markedly disappointed. I have detailed my thoughts on each individual story below, but it suffices to say that this is truly a second-rate collection.
The Langoliers
First and foremost, Stephen King really struggles to write an English accent. In Nick Hopewell, who is a sort of jaded, SAS-graduate James Bond, King attempts to give us an English accent, but it actually reads much more like South African. The frequent use of 'bloody' and referring to everyone as'matey' just made this avid reader think more of Cape Town than Cambridge. Part of me thought King should have cut his losses and just written him as South African, but then no one was going to write a story in 1990 with a member of the South African security services as one of their heroes.
The story itself is a kind of homage to the 'Airport' movies, with a random group of diverse individuals thrown together by a terrible experience on an aeroplane, but with added horror - which makes sense as this is Stephen King rather than Arthur Hailey. But actually, I felt the horror moments were jarring to the rest of the story. There was, of course, a large part of me - the horror fan part - who welcomed the more horrific bits, but those horrific bits are so extreme that they don't match the tone of the rest. This stops being a tale of a group of disparate individuals finding love, friendship, and companionship on a plane in serious trouble and becomes a full-on horror story, but then it tries to switch back to being a tale of a group of disparate individuals finding love, friendship, and companionship on a plane in serious trouble, but it can't do that anymore as those horrific moments are just too powerful. They scar the story, but neither the characters nor the story itself acknowledges this scarring, and the result is a really disjointed, ill-fitting piece of fiction.
In theory, the idea of Stephen King taking on an 'aeroplane in peril' tale makes sense. They're supposed to be scary anyway, so it should be easy for him to crank up the scare factor. As such, I wanted to like 'The Langoliers', but it just didn't work for me. Not only was the tone off, there were too many ill-defined characters, and the ending just left me shaking my head in confusion and bemusement.
1. At the end, the survivors know they'll have to explain all this to the relevant aviation authorities, but how are they going to do this? What on earth are they going to say?
2. When they return to normal time at LAX, there is now a plane buried into the side of the building. Why aren't there now alarms and sirens blaring?
3. Having visited a point of time (non-time?) beyond the end of the day when the langoliers eat the remains of the old day (a ridiculously fuzzy concept if ever there was one. Seriously, is that what happens?), are they not in danger of slipping back out of normal time again when the clock strikes midnight? Yes, they have come back through the time rip, but they've come back into non-time before the start of the day. Do the rules of normal time still apply to them? Aren't they just going to slip back out of the day twenty-four hours from now and face the langoliers again?
4. I know it's an 'Airport' movie staple for the survivors to be jubilant at the end, but after the horrific things that have happened - particularly the deaths of Nick and Dinah - isn't it a bit inappropriate for them to be so deliriously happy?
5. Is the story really hinting at the end that Laurel and Brian will get together? Seriously, it's only forty-five minutes since she lost her last new-found love. Allow a little grieving time, please.
Secret Window, Secret Garden
Ironically, for a story where a man arrives on an author's doorstep claiming to be the actual writer of one of the author's short stories, there would be no debate at all as to who wrote 'Secret Window, Secret Garden'. It is unmistakably King. A story set in Maine, about writing and the scary things that happen (or might happen) to horror authors, full of down-home dialogue and country wisdom. Who else could it be?
Certainly, King does a much better job with intimate horror than an Airport movie pastiche, and for the most part, this is a highly effective chiller. A psychological horror about one man's inability to control the world around him, until it seems like reality itself is slipping away. Except I can't help but think that the contemporaneous 'The Dark Half' (King admits in the introduction that the ideas were linked) did a much better job with the same material. This is an effective chiller, but if you have read 'The Dark Half' (or even 'Misery'), it might strike you as an afterthought.
After that, we have a weirdly deathless epilogue where the investigator explains what happened. Now, clearly, this is based on the last scene in 'Psycho', but whereas to the original viewers of 'Psycho', it would have been a welcome breather after the horror that went before, to modern audiences, it looks like a stilted piece of cinema. Stilted is the best description for the version here too. King tries to jazz it up with the hints of a ghost story, but even that fails to raise the excitement levels.
I don't remember much about the film, but I do remember that the ending was different - Shooter kills Amy and buries her in the secret garden before returning to the Mort personality and not remembering it. It therefore keeps the focus on Mort, loses the dull explanation, and is noticeably darker. Without a doubt, I prefer it.
The Library Policeman
Hooray!
I'm three stories in and I've finally found one of the quality ones that us constant readers have come to want and expect. It's scary, tense, actually manages to be quirkily funny, and has an ending I'm not going to complain about, indeed an ending that goes to much darker places than I thought it would.
A small-town businessman visits his local library and has a run-in with the scary librarian, a librarian who becomes even more terrifying when the man - as of course he would - manages to lose his borrowed books.
If I had a wish here, though, it would be that King had eschewed the supernatural element of the story and instead made it about a small-town library whose custodians are given a huge and bizarre amount of power and the placid, conformist town which lets this happen. Then we'd have a man's desperate Kafkaesque quest to return some library books he no longer has, and no paid-for replacements will do. It would have been an off-beat and original tale, and taken the author a lot further out of his comfort zone than this one does.
Still, the story we have here is pretty damned entertaining.
The Sun Dog
I've always been a complete sucker for stories where things start to move in old paintings or photos, so this story of a vicious hell-hound that is advancing further and further out of the front of the frame with every photo that's taken by a Polaroid camera was always going to be right up my alley. Without a doubt, I think it's the best story in this collection - it's menacing, disturbing, and goes to great lengths to tease out every ounce of terror from its premise; while in emporium owner, Pop Merrill, we have a particularly creepy and repellent character - but as is probably clear by now, I have a lot of problems with this collection, so the best story in it still comes with significant reservations.
I love that King is committed to really finding the terror in the central idea, but whereas it sounds great in principle, the resulting story is just too damn long and baggy. It would work much better at half the length. And that point probably ties into the second flaw: that it could do with another edit. Virtually every female character - not that any of them are prominent - is described as behaving like an actress at some point. It's like King thought of that description for a certain type of fake behavior and then couldn't stop himself from using it again and again and again. Finally, there's the ending (what is it with the stories in this collection and crappy endings?) - a twist epilogue that is needless and rubbish on so many levels.
So 'The Sun Dog' is far from perfect, but when it's at its best, this is vintage King. The section where Pop Merrill attempts to find a buyer for this bizarre Polaroid camera packs in one of the weirdest rogues' galleries in King's oeuvre - with all the details picked out being odd and down-home and just brilliant. While elsewhere - and I know I've moaned about it being too long, so please excuse my inconsistency - but the detour from the main plot to drag out in horribly real detail the young lady shop assistant's dread of the creepy customer is just some fantastically scary writing. Downright disturbing in a way - that no matter what the flaws of the story around it - will warm (or is it chill?) the heart of any horror fan.
For me, it seemed salvageable due to the second story, (The Polaroid Dog) and the already known character construction of SK.
I started with these two stories out of curiosity, since the second story is set in Castle Rock and it is already a legendary location throughout the various works of SK.
The problem with the first story, in my opinion, was that, starting from an original premise, it ended up becoming a plot that, to my taste, was overly elaborate, a bit forced, and with some parts not very believable bordering on absurdity.
In essence, this second anthology is saved by the second part, by its setting, construction, and various nods to other works of King that are so liked.
4 tosses, 3 hits, and there is no bad statistic in this highly varying collection of short works from the man himself.
Langoliers is a rather controversial piece. It's one of the rare cases where King employs some Sci-Fi and cosmic horror elements. However, he doesn't seem to have paid as much attention to characterization as one is accustomed to with him. Something just feels amiss. It's most likely that King isn't the right person for combining worldbuilding and characters, as it seems to make him, or rather the characters he lets do the work, nervous.
Secret Window, Secret Garden is an escalating blackmailing and stalking story with a very finely tuned ending. It's closer to a psychological thriller, a psychothriller, than the horror King usually writes, and it's inspired by real-world problems.
The Library Policeman reminds me of his stories with other strong, mad, and frightening lead female characters, such as the Dark Tower witch and the Misery nightmare nurse, with elements of the old evil from It. I would call it the best of the 4 novellas because it had the potential for a full novel. So much could have been added here.
The Sun Dog is the classic, immediate Kingian gotcha. It's a simple camera used to write a story about occultism, haunting, and greed, even including some ethics about money. It plays with some flashbacks before It also reminds me a bit of the Needful Things concept.
The stories are especially interesting because after rehab, King was unsure if he would still have the same ultimate writing power as before. But luckily, nothing has changed, and as a bonus, he has added extra years to his life to create more unique art.
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