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I thought the art and the rhyme scheme was very well done, I like the repetition of the 'Night' always being capitalized, as if it's alive (though perhaps that's kind of the point). Not sure how I feel about the little girl character who is drawn with black features being described as having a 'face as white as the moon', was an odd choice I thought. Aside from that one line and the message it conveys, I did like the story.