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Having read 'Remember Me' by the same author I decided to give this book a go. Despite not being the biggest fan of babies I wanted to read the book to see what makes the author so popular. I liked the subjects raised in the book - some of the issues are potentially very real but I was largely disappointed, not by the story or plot lines, but how the book was written overall. Kinsella repeats a LOT of words -I swear I read the word 'Incredulous' over a thousand times. Her descriptions are vague as well. She also uses certain phrases that she repeats endlessly. In the end it got very annoying. I thought the last couple of chapters were very poor indeed. Kinsella writes good stories but I don't see why she has to make the character's antics so utterly unbelievable at the end. I also noticed lack of depth in certain characters and I realised the author had used the same names here as in her previous books. To me that just shows lack of imagination, and for an author so hugely successful and popular I thought she could have done a whole lot better.