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Continuing to reread these. This one was fine? Mostly I thought there were too many new characters and too many plotlines. There are four major plotlines interweaving through this, and I think one should have been cut. And I think that one should have been Dryditch fever at Redwall, given it's entire lack of connection to the other three plotlines (which at least converged at the end). Also, because the narrative jumped around so much, I don't know that you spend enough time with any one group of characters to get that invested, particularly in the case of a plotline centred around the outbreak of a deadly illness. I mean, sure there's some tension, but it's hard to get too worked up about how ill ny given character is if you've only spent half a dozen pages with them (at most), none of them particuarly significant.
Basically, entertaining enough, but I think the balance is off in this one.
Basically, entertaining enough, but I think the balance is off in this one.