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If you've read one Redwall book then you've read them all, which if you enjoy them isn't a terrible thing. It has all the same charm and adventure as the other books and tells newish stories while circling around all the previous stories as well. It has it's merits and it's drawbacks but is overall enjoyable.
The hardest part about these books to read is that the writer insists on a strange speech pattern for basically every species and will write it out phonetically. It's like it's written in another language at times and it slows the reading down to figure out what the characters are saying. Like this quote "burrhoo! Ee wasper stungen oi." It's like every character is some english accent jar jar binks. It's not enough that he writes out thickly accented words but he invents mispronunciations for the words and then writes them in a grammatically incorrect way. It's exhausting to read and after 5 books it's driving me crazy. Before it was just the moles who spoke like this and the sparrows had their own annoying speech but in this one it seems like just about every character talks like this. I actually forgot what one of the main characters names were because the other main character mispronounces it everytime.
You want to convey that these characters are speaking in an accent then tell us what their accent is and the reader can imagine it, we know what an english or scottish accent sounds like just please write the story in plain proper english so I can actually read it. Remember too these books are written for kids... famished is already a big enough word for the age demographic without them also needing to figure out that "famishered" is just an intentionally mispronounced version of the word famished.
Feasts, battles, long journeys, violence and joy it's all here.
The hardest part about these books to read is that the writer insists on a strange speech pattern for basically every species and will write it out phonetically. It's like it's written in another language at times and it slows the reading down to figure out what the characters are saying. Like this quote "burrhoo! Ee wasper stungen oi." It's like every character is some english accent jar jar binks. It's not enough that he writes out thickly accented words but he invents mispronunciations for the words and then writes them in a grammatically incorrect way. It's exhausting to read and after 5 books it's driving me crazy. Before it was just the moles who spoke like this and the sparrows had their own annoying speech but in this one it seems like just about every character talks like this. I actually forgot what one of the main characters names were because the other main character mispronounces it everytime.
You want to convey that these characters are speaking in an accent then tell us what their accent is and the reader can imagine it, we know what an english or scottish accent sounds like just please write the story in plain proper english so I can actually read it. Remember too these books are written for kids... famished is already a big enough word for the age demographic without them also needing to figure out that "famishered" is just an intentionally mispronounced version of the word famished.
Feasts, battles, long journeys, violence and joy it's all here.