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I have to say that Orson Scott Card has got to be one of the most intelligent authors I have read. He is very sensible and knows how to get to the real issues. I really liked the story of Empire however the way in which this story is told I did not like. I recently attended one of Cards lectures on how he writes and how he comes up with ideas for stories and I found out that he doesn't ever write a second draft. He rewrites his first draft several times because he believes that the actual life of a story is lost by rewriting over and over again. The problem with this theory is evident in books like Empire. The only real issue I have with this book is the amount of dialog contained in it. The characters are consistently talking about the entire plot with a few action sequences thrown in between the dialog. I think this book would have been so much better if I was shown the clues and allowed to try and figure out what the answers were instead of reading a character who is talking about what he thinks is going on and answers all the mysteries before I even had a chance to figure them out. Card says in the book that a general can be too smart for his own good and end up giving his enemy too much credit. I think Card has been too smart for this story and has denied the reader a chance to solve the mysteries.