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This was an expanded shorter story, and it bears some of the stretch marks of bloat. The last 25% was plotty, but most of the book is entertaining because of the characterization and idiosyncratic relationships. Eccentric parents and three extremely intellectual daughters, temporal weirdness and a weirdly handsome boy next door who only speaks in fairly esoteric quotations. If this had been a first novel from an unknown author, I don't think anyone would have touched it with a ten foot pole.
However, I did enjoy it. I would not seek to imitate the structure, or some other aspects of the plot, etc. if I were trying to get traditionally published. It basically does everything they warned us against at Odyssey. It was both enjoyable and super frustrating. The ending was middling satisfactory, but it read like a super long character sketch.
However, I did enjoy it. I would not seek to imitate the structure, or some other aspects of the plot, etc. if I were trying to get traditionally published. It basically does everything they warned us against at Odyssey. It was both enjoyable and super frustrating. The ending was middling satisfactory, but it read like a super long character sketch.