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"Back to that Congress in the Dark-it must have been working overtime. Sometimes a man seems to reverse himself so that you would say, "He can't do that. It's out of character." Maybe it's not. It could be just another angle, or it might be that the pressures above or below have changed his shape."
You're in this normal-seeming guy's head and it's not an entirely bad place to be and all, but you start wondering what you're seeing. Wondering if this guy has a few screws loose. Maybe he thinks he's a little smarter than he is. Steinbeck is so subtle in his writing of the MC that the character revelations almost feel affected, fake. Like, would this guy do that? The signs are there, though. King's "gun" — that should probably be Chekhov's gun — is shown in a scene. It's "fired" later. Made me wonder if King read this guy. But anyway, the writing is pretty top notch, and it's a really odd thing to never truly feel the main's discontent. He's almost more, in my mind, the wannabe protector of other's contentedness, if you ignore the other alluded-to issues, and what happens at the end . This was way more messed up than I expected, even while already basically knowing what it was building to.
The quote below works quite well in reverse, as another asking himself the same about the character.
“I wonder how many people I've looked at all my life and never seen.”
You're in this normal-seeming guy's head and it's not an entirely bad place to be and all, but you start wondering what you're seeing. Wondering if this guy has a few screws loose. Maybe he thinks he's a little smarter than he is. Steinbeck is so subtle in his writing of the MC that the character revelations almost feel affected, fake. Like, would this guy do that? The signs are there, though. King's "gun" — that should probably be Chekhov's gun — is shown in a scene. It's "fired" later. Made me wonder if King read this guy. But anyway, the writing is pretty top notch, and it's a really odd thing to never truly feel the main's discontent. He's almost more, in my mind, the wannabe protector of other's contentedness, if you ignore the other alluded-to issues, and what happens at the end . This was way more messed up than I expected, even while already basically knowing what it was building to.
The quote below works quite well in reverse, as another asking himself the same about the character.
“I wonder how many people I've looked at all my life and never seen.”