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I tried to read this again because I thought it was relevant to something I've been writing but it's just eugh. Pronoun verbed the noun. Noun verbed over there. I wanted nice things but he was a BAD MAN!!! And he said, he said NO NICE THINGS. EVER!! Because I am BAD!!!!!! Repeat.
I guess it is a pretty good oversimplified narrative about what there is to fear about socialism, but the oversimplification creates a deliberate narrow-mindedness that is to the detriment of the book's argument. When he's-wrong-I'm-right dystopias were refreshing and new, I doubt that was the case, but they can't be gotten away with now.
If you are a writer, please do read this, because if you ever think you're clever for devising some four-legs-good piece of dystopia about some big system or perceived societal wrong, guaranteed there are fifty versions already, and they are all heavy-handed terrible garbage—you don't suck for thinking about writing one, just go with your second or third idea instead.
You know that way when you watch a really bad anti-smoking ad that it irritates you with its lack of subtlety hence lack of respect to you as an audience and perversely makes you want to take up smoking (almost)? Very few people know how to debate properly. It doesn't strengthen your argument to say 'The way I do things is correct and his way is stupid', instead of 'I see the advantages and disadvantages of both strategies but prefer my way.' You know? But there's all these videos all over YouTube: why the left/right doesn't work. Uhhh they both work just fine in moderation, in different ways, and without moderation they both suck in different ways. The problem's people, man. So many of them are just the worst!!!
I guess it is a pretty good oversimplified narrative about what there is to fear about socialism, but the oversimplification creates a deliberate narrow-mindedness that is to the detriment of the book's argument. When he's-wrong-I'm-right dystopias were refreshing and new, I doubt that was the case, but they can't be gotten away with now.
If you are a writer, please do read this, because if you ever think you're clever for devising some four-legs-good piece of dystopia about some big system or perceived societal wrong, guaranteed there are fifty versions already, and they are all heavy-handed terrible garbage—you don't suck for thinking about writing one, just go with your second or third idea instead.
You know that way when you watch a really bad anti-smoking ad that it irritates you with its lack of subtlety hence lack of respect to you as an audience and perversely makes you want to take up smoking (almost)? Very few people know how to debate properly. It doesn't strengthen your argument to say 'The way I do things is correct and his way is stupid', instead of 'I see the advantages and disadvantages of both strategies but prefer my way.' You know? But there's all these videos all over YouTube: why the left/right doesn't work. Uhhh they both work just fine in moderation, in different ways, and without moderation they both suck in different ways. The problem's people, man. So many of them are just the worst!!!