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This is a story of battles. It begins with a battle of principles between Achilles and Agamemnon, and as stubborn as they both are, I could sympathize with both views. I enjoyed that.
I appreciated the depiction of the gods and goddesses. They were a dysfunctional family, deeply flawed, and yet human lives were subject to their whims. And although the gods could choose to ignore a prophecy, they’d usually adhere to one with respect. It made for an integrated unfolding of free will and fate.
I could also see clearly how classic story structure was built in this poem, each action causing a reaction that created an inevitable outcome or conclusion. I appreciated how neither the Trojans nor the Greeks were depicted as evil or wrong (each had their reasons), and in the end I grieved their losses equally.
But so much of the text read like a list and felt very much like The Bible’s section “begat begat begat.” For example, Homer names every man from each ship on both sides of the battle. And most pages describe battle after battle, death after death, without giving the reader enough of character to care. The description of the woundings felt like they were written with the glee and remove of children in a school yard - lots of heads popping off bodies, and eyes popping from heads, which made them kind of fun. I imagine those who listened to these stories back then had prior knowledge of the personalities, and so were invested in their origins and fates. I probably should have done more research.
In the end, the story felt too impersonal to me, unlike The Odyssey, which I enjoyed. I also highly recommend Madeline Miller’s The Song of Achilles, which tells the story of The Iliad within the larger context of the tender and complex relationship between Patroclus and Achilles.
I appreciated the depiction of the gods and goddesses. They were a dysfunctional family, deeply flawed, and yet human lives were subject to their whims. And although the gods could choose to ignore a prophecy, they’d usually adhere to one with respect. It made for an integrated unfolding of free will and fate.
I could also see clearly how classic story structure was built in this poem, each action causing a reaction that created an inevitable outcome or conclusion. I appreciated how neither the Trojans nor the Greeks were depicted as evil or wrong (each had their reasons), and in the end I grieved their losses equally.
But so much of the text read like a list and felt very much like The Bible’s section “begat begat begat.” For example, Homer names every man from each ship on both sides of the battle. And most pages describe battle after battle, death after death, without giving the reader enough of character to care. The description of the woundings felt like they were written with the glee and remove of children in a school yard - lots of heads popping off bodies, and eyes popping from heads, which made them kind of fun. I imagine those who listened to these stories back then had prior knowledge of the personalities, and so were invested in their origins and fates. I probably should have done more research.
In the end, the story felt too impersonal to me, unlike The Odyssey, which I enjoyed. I also highly recommend Madeline Miller’s The Song of Achilles, which tells the story of The Iliad within the larger context of the tender and complex relationship between Patroclus and Achilles.