I was truly enamored with the next author I encountered, George R. R. Martin. I was more than happy to continue with his Song of Fire and Ice series. However, it was a disappointment to learn that the next book in that series has been postponed until 2013. So, I turned to Raymond Feist, who was next on my list.
For a total fantasy novice, this book might hold some charm. But even the books I read during the height of my geeky phase, when I devoured almost nothing but the works of R.A. Salvatore and those published by Forgotten Realms, are significantly superior to this one.
In simple terms, Magician: Apprentice lacks the finesse, beauty, and complexity of the other fantasy works (or even ordinary fiction) that I've read this year. Overall, it reads like a compilation of what were likely very engaging D&D styled scenarios and RPG adventures.
The characters seem to be overly adored by the author. They are all rather generic "nice guys" thrust into challenging situations. They lack flaws and weaknesses, and as a result, they don't develop as characters. They are chivalrous and handsome. When they do fail (which is rare), it's not their fault. All personal conflicts are resolved with a good cry, some laughter, and then a drink. The most significant change in a character is not brought about by learning from experience, harsh reality, or personal introspection, but rather by donning mysterious magical armor. None of the characters face more than brief moral or ethical dilemmas. Since these men only encounter deus ex machina type problems, their growth is never shown; we're just told it's happened after random narrative leaps. Four months pass and generic male hero #1 wants to go home, or 2 years pass and generic male #2 is now battle-hardened. Okay, if you say so. The female characters are even more one-dimensional. All those who are given more than one line of dialogue are beautiful, playful, strong-willed, and eager to find a partner. Even the elven Queen is essentially the same, just with a title.
Putting aside the otherworldly opposition for a moment, the only villains are mentioned in passing. None are fully developed characters, just convenient tools to create minor shifts in the action. The opposition from another world is the most interesting, but unfortunately, much of the consideration and description of them is repetitive. They have different concepts of honor, they're fearless, they speak a tonal language, they come from a world without metal, and they employ a magic beyond the understanding of the Midkemians. These basic points are emphasized over and over again.
"Over and over again" is one of the main issues with this book. So much of it feels like a repetition of the same fight, the same history, and the same description. I read the author's preferred text or edition or something like that. Having not read the original, I can't be certain, but I'm confident that if 20 - 40 pages were trimmed, while many of my complaints about the characters would remain the same, at least the plot would move more quickly.
I also read Magician: Master, which I won't bother to review in detail, but it is a slight improvement. I'd probably give it two stars. The description and exploration of the Kelewan world, its people, and their customs is far more interesting than anything in the first book, but the writing and characters still feel stale and one-dimensional.