Someone really needs to inform Tomoaki that neither raspberries nor grapes grow on trees. He has been spreading such misinformation to his young readers, which is quite concerning. However, it seems that common sense is indeed lacking in this entire world, not just in Hinata's mind. People nowadays seem to be more focused on other things and perhaps don't really care much about correcting such inaccuracies. It's a pity that such misinformation can have an impact on the knowledge and understanding of young readers. Maybe if more people were aware of the importance of accurate information, they would take the time to correct Tomoaki and ensure that the right facts are being presented. But for now, it seems that this issue will continue to persist.

I rate this [article/book/movie etc.] four stars because I have a great appreciation for the art.

The story, on the other hand, is rather... oAo.

It's difficult for me to put into words. It's as if I'm thinking, "oh, okay so that's happening but... and then... so now...". The story did end in a proper manner, without any loose ends. However, I suppose there is that possibility of a continuation. It leaves the door slightly ajar for more to come, which could be interesting. Maybe the characters will face new challenges or there will be further developments in their relationships. Only time will tell if a continuation will be forthcoming and what it will bring.

Overall, while the story had its moments of confusion for me, the art was definitely a亮点 that contributed to my four-star rating.

Finally over,

this whole story could have been a single volume.

It seems that nothing really happens throughout the narrative.

The main character comes across as rather dumb, lacking the ability to make significant decisions or take actions that would drive the story forward.

There are no real plot twists or exciting events to keep the reader engaged.

It's almost as if the author didn't put much thought into developing the story or the characters.

The result is a rather平淡 and uninteresting read that fails to leave any lasting impression.

Perhaps if the main character had been more intelligent and proactive, the story could have had more potential and been more enjoyable to read.

As it stands, however, it's just a forgettable tale that ends with a sense of disappointment.

What a cute story

I truly had an amazing time reading this book. It was so engaging and filled with wonderful characters and a captivating plot. From the very beginning, I was hooked and couldn't put it down.

It's such a pity that it has come to an end. I find myself longing for more, wishing that there was one more volume to continue the adventure. The works of Clamp are simply the best. Their unique art style and storytelling abilities always manage to draw me in and keep me entertained.

I hope that they will consider creating another installment of this story or perhaps come up with something equally as wonderful in the future. Until then, I will cherish the memories of this可爱的 story and look forward to their next masterpiece.

That was anti-climatic.

The plot and intrigue did exist, but unfortunately, the execution completely ruined it. The book seemed to stay too much on the surface and failed to delve deep enough into the story and the characters.

Also, I am firmly against a romance with a huge age gap, especially when one of the characters is an underaged student. It just doesn't sit well with me. No, thank you.

Plus, I have no sympathies for the naive and rather dumb Hina. There were several points in the book that I found interesting, but they were never properly explained, leaving me with a sense of dissatisfaction.

Overall, I have to say that I was extremely bored while reading this book. It had the potential to be so much better, but it just didn't deliver.

I hope the author will consider these points and improve in future works.

To be honest, a sweet genre like this is not CLAMP's cup of tea. CLAMP is more suited to infusing a fantasy aroma into a romance story rather than an earthy nuance like this. Just like Chobits or Wish, which still revolve around the theme of soulmates.

The story is flat, and everyone can already predict the existence of Aso beside Hina. Furthermore, there is no typical CLAMP moment of surprise here. Even Emi's actions towards Hina, everything just progresses flatly. The sweet feeling of a romance also cannot be shown explicitly.

CLAMP's artwork can still be felt, but it is too simple and rough. Maybe because it wants to adapt as a shoujo manga. There are also many empty panels and a lack of background. But of course, all of CLAMP's works are impossible to hate.

This entire series was truly weird.

From the very beginning, the storylines took unexpected turns that left me scratching my head.

The characters' actions and decisions seemed to be driven by some unknown force, making it difficult to understand their motives.

The settings were also quite unusual, with strange landscapes and mysterious objects.

It was as if the author was trying to create a world that was completely different from our own, but in doing so, made it almost too strange to fully engage with.

Despite its weirdness, however, there was something about this series that kept me coming back for more.

Maybe it was the curiosity of trying to figure out what was going on, or perhaps it was the hope that everything would eventually make sense.

Either way, I can't say that I've ever read anything quite like it before.

An Adorable (Yet Predictable) Conclusion to One of CLAMP’s Most Laid Back Works

CLAMP is known for their unique and often complex works. However, this particular work stands out for its laid-back nature. The story unfolds in a rather charming and unhurried manner, allowing the readers to immerse themselves in the characters’ lives and the world that CLAMP has created.

The conclusion of this work is both adorable and somewhat predictable. On one hand, it offers a heartwarming and satisfying end to the story, tying up loose ends and giving the characters the closure they deserve. The relationships between the characters are beautifully developed, and the final scenes are filled with tenderness and emotion.

On the other hand, the predictability of the conclusion may be a bit of a drawback for some readers. Those who are looking for a more unexpected or shocking ending may be disappointed. However, for those who appreciate a well-told story with a charming and likable cast of characters, this conclusion will surely be a delight.

Overall, this work by CLAMP is a wonderful example of their talent for creating engaging and memorable stories. While the conclusion may not be the most original or groundbreaking, it is still a satisfying and enjoyable read that will leave readers with a smile on their faces.

Too short! TOO SHORT! I want to see more future scenes! waahh!

Oh, this piece of writing is really disappointingly brief. It fails to satisfy my intense curiosity for more detailed and vivid future scenes. I long to envision the advanced technologies, the transformed landscapes, and the unique lifestyles that might prevail in the future. There could be flying cars zipping through the sky, intelligent robots performing various tasks with utmost efficiency, and people communicating effortlessly across vast distances through seamless virtual reality interfaces. The cities might be filled with towering skyscrapers made of innovative materials, and the environment could be a harmonious blend of nature and technology. So much more could be explored and described to give a more comprehensive and exciting picture of the future. I truly hope for a more expanded and engaging account that will transport me into the fascinating world of tomorrow.

Hina's actions are truly absurd.

After discovering that her friend was the one who organized her kidnapping, she forgives her immediately. How can one be so lenient in such a serious situation?

Asou, on the other hand, is a bodyguard who still has feelings for Hina. The age difference between them is quite significant, and it gives an uncomfortable and wrong impression.

Hina herself seems rather stupid. She doesn't seem to think things through clearly and makes decisions that are hard to understand.

Overall, the story's plot and character developments are rather unconvincing and leave a lot to be desired.

The least complicated story CLAMP ever wrote is truly a gem.

It is a narrative that unfolds in a straightforward manner, yet manages to captivate the reader's attention.

The simplicity of the plot allows for a seamless reading experience, without the need to decipher convoluted twists and turns.

CLAMP has masterfully crafted a story that is accessible to a wide range of audiences, regardless of their familiarity with the genre.

The characters are well-developed and relatable, adding depth and emotion to the otherwise uncomplicated storyline.

Despite its simplicity, the story still manages to convey important themes and messages, making it a worthwhile read.

Overall, the least complicated story CLAMP ever wrote is a testament to the group's ability to create engaging and memorable works, even within the confines of a simple narrative.

The original article is not provided, so I can't rewrite and expand it specifically. However, I can give you a general example to show you how it might be done.

Let's assume the original article is: "The cat is sitting on the mat. It is a black cat."

Here is the rewritten and expanded version:

The cat is peacefully sitting on the mat.

It is a beautiful black cat with shiny fur that seems to absorb all the light around it.

Its eyes are like two bright emeralds, shining with curiosity and a hint of mischief.

The cat's posture is relaxed, as if it has no care in the world.

It is simply enjoying the moment, lounging on the comfortable mat.

2 / 5

If you can provide the original article, I will be able to give you a more accurate and relevant rewritten and expanded version.