Great writing!!! The story, however, unfolds at a rather slow pace. It seems to take its time in revealing the details and building the plot. While the writing itself is of high quality, the sluggish progression of the story might cause some readers to lose interest.
Perhaps the author intended to create a sense of anticipation and build tension gradually. But sometimes, this slow approach can make the reading experience feel a bit dragging. It would be beneficial if the story could pick up the pace in certain areas to keep the readers engaged and eager to find out what happens next.
Nevertheless, the great writing still shines through, with beautiful descriptions and well-developed characters. It's just that the slow story could potentially benefit from a bit more momentum to truly captivate the audience.