Lie Down in Darkness

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In this novel, the South looms dark and ominous in the background with its Biblical rhetoric, its conflict between a tradition of religious fundamentalism and modern scepticism, racial contrasts and the industrialisation of a rural society. But more than a novel of time and place, it is the story of a tormented family submerged in infidelity and driven by a vengeful love that is blocked, hurt and perverted. Peyton Loftis, who frantically needs a husband precisely because she loves her father; the decadent Milton, whose infidelity has made his marriage no more than a stage drama; and Helen, his wife, who loves only what she can control - her crippled daughter Maudie, or the childish part of her husband. This extraordinarily powerful novel is the portrait of a family who, in the words of Sir Thomas Browne in his "Urn Burial", 'all lie down in darkness'.

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July 15,2025
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Mr Styron is truly in a class of his own, capable of making even the most mundane things like finger nail clippings seem interesting.

Whether or not one enjoyed this novel, it must be conceded that this is some extremely good prose. Styron is not the type of writer who will hold your hand throughout. The point of view shifts on a whim, and as a result, I was only a third of the way through when I finally felt at ease in the milieu of Port Warwick with the Loftis family.

Much of the praise for this book is contingent upon the young age at which Styron composed the novel. However, I would argue that while it is lyrically and poetically impeccable, he centers each character's external and internal conflict around the same fallacy. That is, when push comes to shove, these family members are incorrigibly selfish and petulant individuals who will never subside their selfish tendencies.

The startling beauty of the words can sometimes rob you of the realization that Helen, Milton, and Peyton had this same argument just two years ago or ten pages ago.

If it were up to me, this novel would be required reading for those considering replicating. It is a potent allegory that shows not everyone is cut out to advance the species.
July 15,2025
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Read 56 pages and was still at a funeral. Could not continue.


I was deeply engrossed in the book, turning the pages with great anticipation. But as I reached page 56, I found myself still immersed in the details of a funeral. The description was so vivid and emotional that it felt as if I was actually there, witnessing the solemn event. However, I just couldn't bring myself to continue reading. The sadness and grief that emanated from the words were overwhelming. It made me pause and reflect on the fragility of life and the inevitability of loss. I needed a moment to catch my breath and process the emotions that had been stirred within me. Maybe later, when I'm in a better frame of mind, I'll be able to pick up where I left off and see how the story unfolds.
July 15,2025
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I dedicated two years to the in-depth analysis of this book, which served as the subject of my M.A. thesis.

It is William Styron's first novel, penned when he was in his early 20's. This remarkable piece of literature delves into profound and complex themes such as suicide, depression, incest, and guilt.

The exploration of these themes within the pages of this novel offers a unique and thought-provoking perspective. Styron's ability to handle such sensitive and weighty topics with skill and nuance is truly remarkable.

As I immersed myself in the study of this book, I discovered layers of meaning and depth that I had not initially anticipated. It was a journey of intellectual and emotional discovery.

Does anyone else have an interest in exploring this fascinating novel and its themes? I would love to engage in a discussion with like-minded individuals.
July 15,2025
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I actually delved into the e-book edition provided by Open Road Integrated Media.

This particular edition is enriched with some remarkable supplemental material that offers valuable insights into the life of Styron.

Even though the book itself is rather dark and depressing, the quality of the writing is simply breathtaking.

I truly relished the story, and Styron's handling of it is nothing short of brilliant, especially when one takes into account that he was only 26 years old when it was published.

Of course, I must admit that I was particularly drawn to its Virginia setting and the scenes that unfold at The University.

The fact that it even ventures to New York for a while added an extra layer of interest for me.

Towards the end, I did experience a slight dip in my engagement with the stream-of-consciousness and a closing scene that I can only surmise is rich in symbolism.

Nevertheless, this did not significantly dampen my overall appreciation for the book, and I fully anticipate exploring more of Styron's works in the future.
July 15,2025
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It is indeed possible to have an excess of a seemingly good thing.

This particular book, which is written in a beautifully crafted manner, delves into great detail about a disastrous marriage. It focuses on the union between an alcoholic and a neurotic individual and vividly showcases the deadly consequences their tumultuous love-hate relationship has on their children.

The story is set in the Virginia Tidewater during approximately the time of World War II, thereby depicting the social backdrop against which the characters respond.

However, one cannot overlook the fact that the book is rather long. Perhaps this is a deliberate choice by the author, aiming to illustrate the long-lasting and far-reaching effects that such an unhappy marriage can have.

It forces the reader to endure and experience the full extent of the characters' struggles and the impact it has on their lives and the lives of those around them.

Overall, the book serves as a powerful reminder of the potential pitfalls and consequences of a dysfunctional relationship.
July 15,2025
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In 1945, there is a depressing tale of a completely screwed up Southern family.

It begins with the father picking up the body of his 20-something daughter at the train station. The story then alternates between describing that dreadful day in excruciating slow motion and delving back in time to show how things reached this tragic point.

Essentially, as the author succinctly put it at one moment, the girl was burdened with a "gutless father and soulless mother." But it seems to take an eternity to unfold the impact this double-codependent couple has on each other and their daughter.

I suspect the story holds some sort of metaphorical significance, yet I simply wasn't in the right frame of mind to fully grasp it. Nevertheless, since I have a deep love for William Styron, I just can't bring myself to rate it below 3 stars.

Despite my initial lack of enthusiasm, I'm sure there are hidden depths within this narrative that I may discover upon further reflection.

Perhaps with a more open heart and mind, I will be able to understand the true essence of this tragic family's story and the profound message it conveys.

For now, I'll hold onto my 3-star rating and hope that future readings will reveal more of its hidden treasures.
July 15,2025
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All I can say is that I truly loved this book!

As someone who is from "Port Warwick" myself, I could relate to a great deal of the lifestyles, the language, and the family dynamics presented in the story. Even though it had its flaws, mainly some distorted sentences that were rather difficult to follow, especially in Peyton's final story, I was still intrigued and completely immersed in this narrative.

The ending was not my favorite part, yet I think I have an understanding of Styron's reasons for concluding it in that manner. Styron incorporated all the faults of the 40s and 50s, such as war prejudices, societal norms, class prejudice, race prejudice, and even the prejudice of the South, and covered them in an almost mystical and beautiful way, through the poetical thoughts and philosophies of the characters. So many different character types were included, and he did it with great mastery.

Now, I am onto my next Styron novel, and I simply can't wait to embark on this new literary journey!
July 15,2025
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William Styron was awarded the Prix de Rome of the American Academy of Arts and Letters for his first novel, which he wrote when he was twenty-six. Compared to Updike's Rabbit Run, which was written at a similar age, Styron's work appears to be a much better one.


However, it wasn't a novel that I enjoyed. The echoes of Scott Fitzgerald, which William Burroughs even called it GETS (good enough to steal), diminished the book for me.


For example, in The Great Gatsby, about half-way between West and New York, the motor road hastily joins the railroad and runs beside it for a quarter of a mile to shrink away from a certain desolate area of land. This is a valley of ashes - a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills.


In contrast, in Styron's Lie Down in Darkness, halfway between the railroad station and Port Warwick proper, a distance altogether of two miles, the marshland, petering out in disconsolate, solitary clumps of cattails, yields gradually to higher ground. Here, bordering the road, an unsightly growth of weeds can be seen.


Although Styron's novel has its merits, the influence of Fitzgerald was too prominent for my taste.
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