The novel is set at the end of the Second World War. It mainly focuses on the dissatisfaction of the victorious participants with the peace, as they somehow expected much more. They are uneasy about their role as conquerors and passively horrified that the world seems doomed to fall back into war and conflict, not only between Russia and the US but also with the emerging likelihood of a communist China.
The story revolves around Aldred Leith, a gentleman, intellectual, and war hero with an unnamed great medal. After the war, he is strangely commissioned by a French official to travel through China and then Japan (as the book begins), recording his views on the impact of the war on traditional culture. In Japan, he falls in love with the very young, well-read, and fey daughter of two Australians, who are believed to be uncouth and whose son is dying.
He also visits Shanghai, where we are introduced to Peter Exley, who seems like his clone in every aspect except for Leith's experience with women. Exley's mother implies that a cheerful young woman would redeem her son's restlessness, not realizing that the son, whose wanderings are far from wayward, is already over-redeemed in some respects. Exley's existence in the novel, although significant, seems pointless.
When Aldred's famous author father dies, he has to return to England, while Helen's family travels to New Zealand. The two write and share their experiences. Aldred meets his mother, helps some local working-class people, meets the childhood tutor of Helen and her brother, and his old lover who became his father's mistress. Helen spends time with local families discussing the melancholy of New Zealand. Then, when Helen's brother dies in the US, they are reunited when Helen refuses to travel with her parents and Aldred goes to New Zealand to meet her. The book ends with them making love for the first time.
The novel apparently took over twenty years to write, and it is evident that the author has spent a great deal of time on each sentence, perhaps even each word. The author is undoubtedly extremely talented and capable of great beauty and insight. However, unlike a Makine book where re-reading reveals additional insight, here, on many occasions, instead of beauty or insight, it simply reveals sentences that are over-engineered to the point of incomprehensibility. The characters are either working or middle-class stereotypes, meant to be unlikeable and in some cases, speaking in absurd dialogue, or (for Helen, her brother, Aldred, Exley, and a few others) one-dimensional and conversing in a strange old-fashioned present tense.
While I truly desired to assign it a higher rating, I encountered significant difficulties in reading this book. At times, the author's writing style was extremely challenging for me to decipher, which unfortunately diminished my overall enjoyment of it.
On one hand, the sentences within the book could be truly lovely, intricate, and highly descriptive. For instance, there was a line that read: "Having expected, repeatedly, to die from the great fires into which his times had pitched him, he discovered a desire to live completely; by which he meant, with her." This kind of writing had the potential to draw the reader in and create a vivid mental image.
On the other hand, the author's use of language could be so subtle that it was almost unintelligible. I am by no means a novice reader, as I assume is quite evident. However, there were moments when it felt as if the author was deliberately trying to be confusing or was removing all but the most delicate hint of context from a sentence. As a result, I often had to read a sentence three times and allow it to sink in for a while before I could fully understand its meaning. Some individuals might appreciate this kind of writing, which is like a puzzle to be solved, but I, unfortunately, did not.
When I made an attempt to read certain passages aloud, it actually proved to be somewhat helpful. I also suspect that engaging in discussions about the book with others might have enhanced my understanding as well. Even so, considering it is a love story, it seemed rather distant and lacking in passion. The dialogue between the lovers was terser than what seemed necessary. Perhaps this is one of those rare books that I would have preferred to experience as a movie instead?