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I have a friend who comes to the book club and remarks, "Oh, I hated this book." But then, curiously, he proceeds to tell us everything he liked about it. I must be his polar opposite - at least in this particular instance - because I truly liked this book - or at least the story of Leith, Helen, and Ben. However, I did encounter a problem. The secondary characters seemed to encroach on the narrative constantly, drawing my attention away from the three characters I was most eager to read about. This was especially infuriating in the last third of the novel when Hazzard introduced several characters. She took pages to introduce them, only to have them disappear from the rest of the novel. I did enjoy Bertram, and I would have liked more of him. Also, after all the time she dedicated to Ben and Peter, I would have appreciated a bit more of their stories from their own points of view. The few paragraphs we were given seemed almost like an afterthought, as if she was thinking, "oh, I almost forgot..." It's ironic that I say this about Peter because, if I were writing or editing this, I would have cut his character down. She gives us too much of his story, which becomes a distraction, and then fails to follow up. It's a flaw. Yes, I'm afraid this is a 200-page story stretched into a 300-page book. This is the second book I've read by Hazzard. I love her writing - her use of language and phrasing is truly remarkable. I understand that it may sound as though I didn't like the book, but that's not the case. I did like it very much. I simply would have liked it even more had the narrative been a bit tighter and shorter.