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July 15,2025
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I mean, poetry in translation.

It's hard to know, right? Poetry is a unique form of art that often relies on the specific words, rhythms, and cultural connotations of the original language. When it is translated into another language, many of these elements can be lost or distorted.

Translators face the difficult task of trying to convey the essence and beauty of the original poem while also making it understandable and enjoyable for readers of the new language. They must make choices about which words to use, how to handle the rhythm and meter, and how to capture the cultural references and nuances.

Even the most skilled translators may not be able to fully capture the magic of the original poem. Different languages have different structures and vocabularies, and some concepts may not have an exact equivalent in another language. As a result, the translated poem may not have the same impact or emotional resonance as the original.

However, despite these challenges, poetry translation is still an important and valuable activity. It allows people from different cultures to experience and appreciate the beauty of poetry from around the world. It can also help to promote cross-cultural understanding and communication.

In conclusion, while poetry in translation may never be exactly the same as the original, it can still offer readers a glimpse into the rich and diverse world of poetry.
July 15,2025
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In this remarkable passage, we are presented with a profound and evocative image.

"For one enormous moment and we glimpse
the unity that we lost, the desolation
of being man, and all its glories,
sharing bread and sun and death,
the forgotten astonishment of being alive;\\"
It speaks of a fleeting instant when we catch a glimpse of something greater, something that has been lost in the hustle and bustle of our daily lives.

The unity that we once had, but have since forgotten, is brought to the forefront. We are reminded of the desolation that comes with being human, yet also of the glories that we can achieve. Sharing bread, the simple act of nourishing ourselves and others, and the warmth of the sun, are juxtaposed with the inevitability of death.

But it is the final line that truly stands out. The forgotten astonishment of being alive. In our busy lives, we often take for granted the miracle of simply existing. This passage encourages us to stop, to look around, and to truly appreciate the wonder of being alive.
July 15,2025
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In the second half of my life, I have shattered stones,

penetrated painful walls,

sold broken doors,

and overcome obstacles that in the first half of my life,

I had within my reach but failed to obtain.

My life has been a journey of challenges and triumphs, with each experience shaping who I am today.

I have learned that perseverance and determination are the keys to success, and that even in the face of adversity, one can find the strength to keep going.

As I look back on my life, I am proud of what I have accomplished, but I also know that there is still much more to do.

I will continue to strive for excellence, to break down barriers, and to make a positive impact on the world around me.

For me, life is about never giving up and always reaching for the stars.
July 15,2025
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Stone means patience, silence, perseverance and is in contrast to movement. The sun is also a symbol of the spiritual realm.

In the poem, it also says that there is a world where a person is always alone by nature and cannot be complete without another unless he learns how to love another person in the physical and daily affairs.

"I" cannot have a single meaning and be unconnected with "you".

I am not just myself in work, we are always together...

Life is never really that us.

It is always of others.

Life is no one's.

We are all life itself.

The bread of the sun is for others.

Those others who we are.

When I am to be someone else.

My deeds are more of that "I".

That moment when it is of those others.

In order to be me, I must be someone else.

I give up being myself.

And seek myself.

In others.

Those others who are not.

Because I am not.

Others return the whole being to me.

I am not just myself in work, we are always together.

Actavo Paz.
July 15,2025
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I truly have a great passion for reading Octavio Paz. His poetry is not only lush and romantic but also filled with powerful images that leave a deep impression. This particular book features parallel pages with both the Spanish text and its English translation. Even though I don't have the ability to read Spanish proficiently, I still take great pleasure in being able to glance over to the other side and peruse the words in the original language after reading the translation. There are numerous references hidden within this work, referring to both relatively contemporary figures and historical ones. I really wish I had a poetry club or some similar group to read this with me, so that I could engage in discussions about the images with others. Without a doubt, I will actively seek out more of Paz's writing in the future.

July 15,2025
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Brilliant!

This simple word holds within it a world of meaning and potential. It can describe a person's intelligence, a moment of inspiration, or a work of art that takes our breath away.

When we encounter something brilliant, it has the power to captivate us, to make us stop and take notice. It can inspire us to reach for greater heights, to strive for excellence in our own lives.

A brilliant idea can change the course of history, a brilliant performance can leave us in awe, and a brilliant smile can brighten even the darkest of days.

Let us all strive to be brilliant in our own unique ways, to shine a light in the darkness and make a positive impact on the world around us.

Because in a world that can often seem dull and ordinary, it is the brilliant moments that truly make life worth living.

July 15,2025
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I never tire of reading and rereading "Piedra de Sol". Whether it's in the mountains, on the beach, during a trip, on a plane, or on a road trip, any place is perfect for reading this poem. I believe it is my favorite poem.

"Piedra de Sol" is the eternal return. It begins and ends with the same words, because of the eternity of life itself. The repetition of the words gives a sense of circularity and timelessness. It makes me think about the cyclical nature of life, how things come and go, but there is always a sense of continuity.

Every time I read this poem, I discover something new. The words seem to take on different meanings depending on my mood and the context in which I am reading. It's like a magical key that unlocks different emotions and thoughts within me.

I love the way the poet uses language to create such a vivid and powerful image. The description of the sun, the stone, and the surrounding environment is so detailed and beautiful that it makes me feel as if I am actually there.

In conclusion, "Piedra de Sol" is not just a poem, but a work of art that has touched my heart and soul. I will continue to read and reread it, and I hope that others will also have the opportunity to experience its beauty and power.
July 15,2025
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I don't really use this app much,

but I had to come back for this.

I'm not a huge poetry guy,

but this poem affected me more in its 21 pages than most pieces of literature have in my life.

Love is beautiful and horrible,

but most of all powerful.

It can, at the same time, bring the world to life and end it and trap you in a moment.

Anyways, I think that everyone should read this poem.

There is literally no reason not to.

Love is such a complex and profound emotion.

This poem manages to capture its essence in a way that is truly remarkable.

It makes you think about the different aspects of love and how it can impact our lives.

Whether it's the joy and happiness it brings or the pain and heartbreak,

love is always there, shaping who we are.

Reading this poem is like taking a journey through the many faces of love.

It's a journey that everyone should take at least once in their lives.

So, if you haven't read this poem yet,

I highly recommend that you do.

You won't be disappointed.
July 15,2025
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The first time I read this poem, after a while I came to myself and saw that I was flying aimlessly in this poem. Then I read Wang Hui's translation. Surely it will be much more magnificent and amazing in the original language.

This poem seems to have a magical power that draws me in and makes me lose myself in its world. The words seem to dance on the page, creating a vivid and beautiful image in my mind.

Although I can only understand it through translation, I can still feel the profound emotions and thoughts hidden within the poem. I wonder what kind of inspiration and feelings the poet had when writing it.

Maybe one day, I will be able to learn the original language and read this poem in its true form, experiencing its full beauty and charm. Until then, I will continue to explore and appreciate it through translation.
July 15,2025
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They tore their clothes and became silent.


Because when naked bodies come together,


people flee from time and receive incurable wounds,


nothing can reach them,


they return to the open spring.


There is no me and you, tomorrow, yesterday, no name,


the truth of two people is one soul and body.



Expansion:

They tore their clothes in a fit of passion and then fell into a profound silence. The act of baring their bodies and coming together was a moment of intense vulnerability. In this state, they felt a sense of liberation from the constraints of time. People often flee from the raw emotions and potential pain that can come with such intimacy, but in this instance, they embraced it. Nothing could penetrate their shared space. They returned to the open spring, a place of purity and renewal. Here, there was no distinction between me and you, no concept of tomorrow or yesterday, and no need for names. The truth they discovered was that the essence of two people could merge into one soul and body, creating a connection that was both profound and indescribable.

July 15,2025
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We often overlook the unity that has been lost to us.

We focus only on the limitations of being human,

on the sorrow of being human,

the sorrow of dividing the bread, dividing the sun and death,

the miracle of the forgotten state of being alive.

In our daily lives, we are so preoccupied with our own concerns and the challenges we face that we fail to see the bigger picture of unity. We are too caught up in the human experience of sorrow and division, whether it is the division of resources like bread or the inevitable separation that comes with death. However, within this human condition lies a forgotten miracle - the miracle of being alive. We take for granted the simple fact that we are breathing, experiencing the world around us, and having the opportunity to make a difference. We should strive to remember this miracle and look beyond our individual sorrows to embrace the unity that exists within and among us all.
July 15,2025
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Hello to my new favorite poem of all time. And it's a single sentence.


A path through the wilderness of days to come,


and the gloomy splendor of misery like a bird


whose song can turn a forest to stone,


and the imminent joys on branches that vanish,


the hours of light pecked away by the birds,


and the omens that slip past the hand,


a sudden presence like a burst of song,


like the wind singing in a burning building.


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All is transformed, all is sacred,


every room is the center of the world,


it's still the first night, and the first day,


the world is born when two people kiss,


a drop of light from transparent juices,


the room cracks half-open like a fruit


or explodes in silence like a star.


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The kingdom where pronouns are intertwined.


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I walk through the streets of myself


under an ageless sun, and by my side


you walk like a tree, you walk like a river,


and talk to me like the course of a river,


you grow like wheat between my hands,


you throb like a squirrel between my hands,


you fly like a thousand birds, and your laugh


is like the spray of the sea, your head


is a star between my hands, the world


grows green again when you smile.



This poem takes us on a journey through a world of vivid imagery and profound emotions. The path through the wilderness represents the unknown future, filled with both the gloom of misery and the fleeting joys that vanish like birds. The omens that slip past our hands add an element of mystery and uncertainty.


The transformation of all into the sacred and every room becoming the center of the world creates a sense of wonder and awe. The birth of the world through a kiss is a beautiful and powerful image, as is the room cracking open like a fruit or exploding like a star.


The kingdom where pronouns are intertwined suggests a deep connection between two people, while the description of walking through the streets of oneself under an ageless sun and having someone by your side who walks like a tree and a river and talks like the course of a river is both comforting and inspiring.


Overall, this poem is a masterpiece of language and imagery, inviting us to explore the depths of our emotions and the mysteries of the world around us.
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