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Despite the indulgent spirituality that is peppered throughout the text and the often hard-to-follow stop/start faux-poetic quality of the prose, I was still truly rooting for this book. I initially had a genuine connection with the three main characters, flaws and all. I was also enjoying some of the language experiments that the author was conducting, although most of them didn't quite work. Nevertheless, I still admired the spirit behind them. (I did like the convention of indenting the character's inner monologues, which seemed like a good idea that could be used elsewhere.) However, the book quickly delved into territory that I found reprehensible. So, spoilers ahead. Basically, a child is abused. It is violent and not pleasant to read about. In most cases, this would be acceptable. I don't expect my books to sugarcoat the real world or create flawless and perfect characters. It's how Hulme then handles this abuse that infuriates me. First, there was lip service paid to how bad child abuse is. Okay, fine, that's a good first step. But then, the book slowly starts to shift its position, dropping hints that it's okay to slap your child over the head sometimes when he makes you angry. It's only when you completely maim them that it's not okay. And even then, it's forgivable when you love the child and the child loves you, right? In fact, child protective services, the cops, the doctors, and the psychologists are supposedly looking out for the child's interests, but they don't really know him. They don't understand the bond that has formed between the child and the abuser! They're not really listening to what the child truly wants, which is to go back to his abusive father. And oh, about that abusive father? Don't worry, we can forgive him because he went on a spiritual journey and met a Maori elder who told him about a god in a river that he is looking after. I mean, that was completely random and out of left field. What does that have to do with his abusive behavior? He hasn't really earned forgiveness or anything, but look, he had a tough life growing up, and then his wife died, and lots of sad things happened in his life. So, give him a break, will ya? Besides, he found a random god! So, that's gotta be worth some kind of redemption, right? Because of spirituality and magic and stuff. Also, the kid is shrouded in mystery, which is fine, but we're not going to explain anything, not really. We're just going to say he was traveling with a bunch of coke heads, which should explain the fear of needles thing. Which is really the least of the mysteries. I mean, the kid has a voice, can scream, knows words, can write, can even mouth words silently, but won't talk. Why is that? Oh, coke heads... hmmm. And that ending was just like "OK, everyone lives happily ever after. Let's sweep everything under the rug because now there's magic, and so they can all be together and never experience abuse ever again." After creating relatively complex and flawed characters, I'm surprised Hulme thought this Deus Ex Machina type of ending was really going to cut it. It's like she stopped trying or caring. I don't mind child abuse being addressed or even portrayed without judgment. But this book goes too far in that it actually implies that child abuse is okay as long as the abuser has found spiritual enlightenment and promises, I mean, really promises, he won't ever do it again, right? (wink, wink)