It is a good proposal, but it is disappointing. Although it attempts to be an update of the hard-boiled adventures of the pulps, it remains just a simple thriller. Neither the style, nor the events nor the characters are attractive. The explosive ending leaves you indifferent.
The story seems to lack that certain something that would make it truly engaging. The writing style is rather平淡, failing to draw the reader in and keep them hooked. The events unfold in a rather predictable manner, without any real surprises or twists to keep the reader on the edge of their seat.
The characters also fall short. They lack depth and complexity, making it difficult for the reader to form an emotional connection with them. Without that connection, the reader is left feeling detached from the story and its outcome.
In conclusion, while the idea behind this work may have been good, the execution leaves much to be desired. It fails to live up to its potential and ends up being a rather forgettable read.