Eh, I sort of liked it. There was something about it that initially caught my attention. However, as I delved deeper, it became increasingly clear that it felt very unfinished.
Especially when it came to the characters and their motivations. The characters seemed somewhat one-dimensional, lacking the depth and complexity that would have made them truly engaging. Their actions and decisions often felt arbitrary, as if there was no real thought or reasoning behind them.
This lack of development in the characters and their motivations detracted from the overall experience of the story. It made it difficult to fully invest in what was happening and to truly understand the significance of the events.
Despite these flaws, there was still a glimmer of potential in the story. With some further refinement and development, it could have been a really great piece. But as it stands, it falls short of achieving its full potential.