Yup... I have to agree... not his best work.
I gave it 3 stars because 2.5 stars isn’t an option, so I rounded up.
The duck hunting sections at the beginning and the end aren’t bad. They add a certain charm and a touch of the outdoors to the story.
But boy, the middle section was really getting on my nerves. All that “I love you, whatever that means” and “I’m not boring you” (actually, yes you are). It just seemed so repetitive and dragged on.
I have read most of Hemingway’s stuff, and I have to say that this one didn’t quite measure up.
I had avoided this particular work for probably 25+ years. I guess I should have continued to avoid it.
Oh, well... now I know.
Maybe others will have a different opinion, but for me, it just wasn’t what I was expecting from Hemingway.
Nevertheless, I still respect his writing and will continue to explore his other works.
Hemingway is one of those indispensable writers for anyone who loves to read. Reading his works, we come to understand the reasons why an author is praised. But sometimes, we may not fully understand the fuss around a particular literary work or writer. I read him as if no one had ever said he is one of the greatest writers of our time, which sometimes might be confused with looking for his flaws. At first, this happened quite often, but later I got involved in the story and my appreciation became more refined, with an anti-influence filter. I like to evaluate things based on my own thinking, not on what others say about the book or the author's status in the literary world, but on everything else I have read.
One of the highlights of the book is the dialogues. Although they may not make much sense as they seem to follow the rhythm of thoughts and associations of ideas, they have some more important features for understanding the characters and their inner world than the descriptive content of their heads. The writing is also easy, light, and fluid, although sometimes it gets lost in overly technical or frankly unnecessary details. The author is very visual, which sometimes benefits the work and sometimes makes it more boring.
In this specific book, Hemingway explores the life of a colonel who fought in World War II, with part of his mission taking place in Italy. We are thus in Venice, where Ricardo (I think it's Richard in the original, not understanding if this is the reason for this translation) lives what he tells us (about ten times) is his "last and only and true love." I found the colonel too egocentric, imposing authority from time to time, giving orders about everything. I liked his rude treatment, the roughness with which he expresses himself, and the cynical way he sees the world, power, war, and its spheres and "heroes." Some reflections are interesting. One of them that stuck with me was the colonel's "only, last and true love" suggesting that he write his war memoirs. The colonel tells his "only, last and true love" that this kind of war novel is better written by those who did not fight or really live the war. I had to agree.
Hemingway is clearly very - too - related to the conflict to write something that is not realistic, technical, fussy, and, of course, sometimes annoying, regarding the so-called war. From a certain point on, the novel became a long monologue of the colonel about the war episodes. The female character (Renata) seems to exist only to beg him for explanations about the war. I think I understand the author's idea: let's say that she really loves him, even with his maimed hand, and that she is interested in what is greater in him; the profession, the war. In my opinion, this woman does not exist. Secondly, when she sleeps, when he thinks, when he looks at her portrait, in the mirror, at the boatman, at the Grand Maestro, at Count Alvarito, and all the other characters, it is always the war, always the same shadow interfering in every thread of the narrative. As I said, the book is a long monologue with secondary characters as a receptacle for these words about the same subject.
The colonel, however, is a very realistic character. I understand the nuances of his thinking, how much he struggles to be cordial when, in his nature and experience, he has only acquired habits of brusqueness and roughness.
The highlight of the book for me was one or two paragraphs (at most), in which the colonel finally tells two details, two human episodes about the war. An episode in which finally people talk about the names of generals and lieutenants, not about airplanes, operations, specific stretches of a road, in operation such and such, with a motor type X and a pistol type Y, or in the uniform with the medal Z for the officer such and such.
I will not give up on the author, but it was not unforgettable for me.
Classification: 3.5
Average rating of 3.33 indicates that those who have read this novel understood nothing. This is also due to a criticism contemporary to the novel that has buried the novel itself. I'm not talking about those who give 5 stars to the novels of Donato Carrisi or Erin Doom or Saviano, who don't even know the existence of this novel, whether or not they know who Ernest Hemingway is. I'm talking about those who have read more than one of his novels and know his story, what he has been through. This novel is a testament, a novel of memories much more than "The Sun Also Rises". The protagonist is an elderly Hemingway wandering in a desolate Venice immersed in an equally desolate lagoon. It's not the Hemingway who blows up the bridge in "For Whom the Bell Tolls". It's a tired, defeated Hemingway, a lion who fought in his youth. It's a Hemingway who until the very end has repeated that war is shit, it's a horror.
Hell, that took way too long. I can't believe how much time has been wasted on this. And hell, I've really read an excessive amount of Hemingway. His writing style seems to have seeped into my consciousness.
Hell, I'm even starting to sound exactly like him. It's almost as if his words are coming out of my mouth.
Hell, this is not what I intended. I wanted to have my own unique voice, but now it feels like I'm trapped in his literary shadow.
Maybe I need to step back and take a break from reading Hemingway for a while. I need to find my own way of expressing myself, without relying so much on his influence.
Otherwise, I'll just continue to sound like a poor imitation of a great writer. And that's the last thing I want.