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Although normally a big fan of Redwall, I found this addition to the canon disappointing. It's not a bad book, I just felt it could have been a lot better than it was.
There are of course, some good things about it. Brian Jacques is a good writer so of course it's well written with lots of nice descriptions. However, I felt this was outweighed by the book's failings.
The worse failing is with the main character. Tagg (short for Taggerung) has, apart from his incredible fighting skills, no personality whatsoever. He's just bland. He's almost too perfect, even for a Redwall hero, there's nothing either to like or to dislike about him. This left me feeling completely indifferent to his fate; this is actually one of the few Redwall books where I found myself rooting for the villains rather than the hero. This is a real shame as Tagg had the potential as a hero raised by villians to be one of the most complex and interesting Redwall heroes of all. Why oh why did Jacques not decide to follow the precedent set by Veil in Outcast of Redwall where the character is caught between to opposing forces? That would have made him a far better character. Instead, Jacques decided that nature was going to storm over nurture; despite being raised by vermin, Tagg is left completely untainted by it all.
The second failing is with Redwall. With no huge army of vermin bearing down on the Abbey in this book and the hero nowhere in the vicinity, the story was in danger of ignoring the Abbey completely. To get around this, the side plot of a search for various clues left by Abbess Song is instituted. However, it failed to grab me especially as the riddles turn out to be practically unsolvable.
Finally, there's the trip to the mountain. Despite making up a third of the book, it doesn't seem to lead anywhere. Tagg and Nimbalo meet up along the way, but they didn't have to go to the mountain for that. All the characters they meet along the way are superfluous and don't really add much to the overall plot (with the possible exception of the visit to Nimbalo's father).
There are some good things about the book, of course. Nimbalo is, unlike Tagg, extremely engaging as a character, possibly because of his defects. He's had a tough upbringing (which unlike Tagg's has left him mentally scarred), he tells outrageous fibbs and provides much needed comic relief. Even his name is good: Nimbalo the Slayer. Jacques does a splendid job with this character. There was an obvious danger that he could have turned into simply a watered down version of Gonff the Mousethief; instead, Jacques managed to craft a whole new character.
The other good thing concerns the villains. Although there were arguably far too many of them and though it would have been more interesting to have Sawney Rath in command (due to his complex relationship with Tagg), it was definitely nice to see villains (I'm thinking of Vallug and Efreera in particular) who were not afraid to face the hero. Vallug in particular was delightfully sinister and his relationship with Efreera was brilliant; both hate each other and want the other dead, however they are forced to hide their animosity as each needs the others skills.
Finally, I enjoyed the irony of the whole Taggerung concept; being the Taggerung is of no benefit to Tagg because it simply means that others will constantly try and challenge him in order to steal the title. Cowards like Gruven want the title because it allows them to dominate without being brave. The only way that Tagg can escape the endless circle is to adopt a new name and to remove his tattoos.
Oh. one final thing. Nimbalo is definitely right, Tagg is a far better name than Deyna.
There are of course, some good things about it. Brian Jacques is a good writer so of course it's well written with lots of nice descriptions. However, I felt this was outweighed by the book's failings.
The worse failing is with the main character. Tagg (short for Taggerung) has, apart from his incredible fighting skills, no personality whatsoever. He's just bland. He's almost too perfect, even for a Redwall hero, there's nothing either to like or to dislike about him. This left me feeling completely indifferent to his fate; this is actually one of the few Redwall books where I found myself rooting for the villains rather than the hero. This is a real shame as Tagg had the potential as a hero raised by villians to be one of the most complex and interesting Redwall heroes of all. Why oh why did Jacques not decide to follow the precedent set by Veil in Outcast of Redwall where the character is caught between to opposing forces? That would have made him a far better character. Instead, Jacques decided that nature was going to storm over nurture; despite being raised by vermin, Tagg is left completely untainted by it all.
The second failing is with Redwall. With no huge army of vermin bearing down on the Abbey in this book and the hero nowhere in the vicinity, the story was in danger of ignoring the Abbey completely. To get around this, the side plot of a search for various clues left by Abbess Song is instituted. However, it failed to grab me especially as the riddles turn out to be practically unsolvable.
Finally, there's the trip to the mountain. Despite making up a third of the book, it doesn't seem to lead anywhere. Tagg and Nimbalo meet up along the way, but they didn't have to go to the mountain for that. All the characters they meet along the way are superfluous and don't really add much to the overall plot (with the possible exception of the visit to Nimbalo's father).
There are some good things about the book, of course. Nimbalo is, unlike Tagg, extremely engaging as a character, possibly because of his defects. He's had a tough upbringing (which unlike Tagg's has left him mentally scarred), he tells outrageous fibbs and provides much needed comic relief. Even his name is good: Nimbalo the Slayer. Jacques does a splendid job with this character. There was an obvious danger that he could have turned into simply a watered down version of Gonff the Mousethief; instead, Jacques managed to craft a whole new character.
The other good thing concerns the villains. Although there were arguably far too many of them and though it would have been more interesting to have Sawney Rath in command (due to his complex relationship with Tagg), it was definitely nice to see villains (I'm thinking of Vallug and Efreera in particular) who were not afraid to face the hero. Vallug in particular was delightfully sinister and his relationship with Efreera was brilliant; both hate each other and want the other dead, however they are forced to hide their animosity as each needs the others skills.
Finally, I enjoyed the irony of the whole Taggerung concept; being the Taggerung is of no benefit to Tagg because it simply means that others will constantly try and challenge him in order to steal the title. Cowards like Gruven want the title because it allows them to dominate without being brave. The only way that Tagg can escape the endless circle is to adopt a new name and to remove his tattoos.
Oh. one final thing. Nimbalo is definitely right, Tagg is a far better name than Deyna.