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Storyline: 4/5
Characters: 4/5
Writing Style: 4/5
World: 4/5
I admit it; I was spellbound through the first in this series and for half of this second. The writing is lyrical, the magic enchanting, the characters ever-so-human. It's not an America I ever knew, yet it is an America I can recognize and relate to. The story itself is powerful and full of meaning.
The spell was never fully broken, but it surely ebbed when the placing of Mormon allegories superseded the telling of this folktale, the building of this American mythology. At times they were so heavy-handed and blunt that I felt condescended to. At other times they were just outright bizarre and ill-placed.
Also, despite this being longer than the first, it still felt rushed. In the first magic was something familiar but seldom spoken of, those with the "knack" were given special deference though not status, and miracles were still treated as miraculous. In the second there are far too many characters with supernatural abilities and the reaction from normal folk no longer carries with it the reverence and superstition it did earlier. Rather than seven 350-page novels, I would much rather have taken on a trilogy of a thousand pages per volume. Then this series might have stood a chance at being the great American fantasy. These relatively short installments are not only too packed, but they're a little too orderly. Card needed a little space to let chapters grow out of control and unevenly spaced. Something a little less formulaic and less tidy would have been appropriate for an American tale.
Characters: 4/5
Writing Style: 4/5
World: 4/5
I admit it; I was spellbound through the first in this series and for half of this second. The writing is lyrical, the magic enchanting, the characters ever-so-human. It's not an America I ever knew, yet it is an America I can recognize and relate to. The story itself is powerful and full of meaning.
The spell was never fully broken, but it surely ebbed when the placing of Mormon allegories superseded the telling of this folktale, the building of this American mythology. At times they were so heavy-handed and blunt that I felt condescended to. At other times they were just outright bizarre and ill-placed.
Also, despite this being longer than the first, it still felt rushed. In the first magic was something familiar but seldom spoken of, those with the "knack" were given special deference though not status, and miracles were still treated as miraculous. In the second there are far too many characters with supernatural abilities and the reaction from normal folk no longer carries with it the reverence and superstition it did earlier. Rather than seven 350-page novels, I would much rather have taken on a trilogy of a thousand pages per volume. Then this series might have stood a chance at being the great American fantasy. These relatively short installments are not only too packed, but they're a little too orderly. Card needed a little space to let chapters grow out of control and unevenly spaced. Something a little less formulaic and less tidy would have been appropriate for an American tale.