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I liked this book quite a bit, but it had two pretty big problems.
1. There are too many characters for so small a book. It was only towards about page 180 that I figured out that Trish and Leigh were two different people. I had somehow combined them into one super character in my head until that point. I'm sure that this specific problem didn't occur for many, but it is just an example of how confusing it can be to introduce six main characters within a span of 50 pages. The big characters were Max and Peggy Jean. He should've either stuck with them or made this a 400 page book.
2. It took awhile for the action to start. I felt that there were too many references to the Selevision inventory and inner workings. I understand that he was trying to be detailed and draw us into the "world of home shopping", but instead it just made the pace drag. Once he cut the rate of the references down about a quarter of the way through the book, it was a lot more enjoyable. The meat of the story was the characters and once he focused more on them, it got really good.
This book was extremely funny. I found it to have more frequent laughs than his non fiction stuff. I gave it four stars because I wouldn't have a problem with reading it again. I hope Burroughs gives fiction another try.
1. There are too many characters for so small a book. It was only towards about page 180 that I figured out that Trish and Leigh were two different people. I had somehow combined them into one super character in my head until that point. I'm sure that this specific problem didn't occur for many, but it is just an example of how confusing it can be to introduce six main characters within a span of 50 pages. The big characters were Max and Peggy Jean. He should've either stuck with them or made this a 400 page book.
2. It took awhile for the action to start. I felt that there were too many references to the Selevision inventory and inner workings. I understand that he was trying to be detailed and draw us into the "world of home shopping", but instead it just made the pace drag. Once he cut the rate of the references down about a quarter of the way through the book, it was a lot more enjoyable. The meat of the story was the characters and once he focused more on them, it got really good.
This book was extremely funny. I found it to have more frequent laughs than his non fiction stuff. I gave it four stars because I wouldn't have a problem with reading it again. I hope Burroughs gives fiction another try.