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2 stars
I like Smith as a person, but I just didn’t like this book. It’s probably one of the most uneven books I’ve read. The first part was so poorly constructed that I almost DNF’ed it. Smith throws us in the middle of what is meant to be a dramatic occurrence but without sufficient context for us to appreciate the drama, so I was lost for 50 pages or so. I could have tolerated this had the characters been interesting, but they were insufferable. I couldn’t understand why they were acting the way they did, and the dialogue was cringe-worthy, highly stylized, and artificial. In terms of storytelling, Smith preferred to tell the readers about the most dramatic moments after they’d happened, instead of showing them on the page. I can recall more descriptions of FURNITURE rather than actual drama in the first part.
The second part was better, which is saying something, because books hardly get better for me once I’ve spent 100+ pages disliking them. I was surprised actually highlighting for an interesting turn of phrase or insight rather than out of spite. It’s in the second part that Smith really tackles her themes—race, class, beauty, liberalism and conservatism, the utter pretentiousness and impenetrability of academia, etc. While the scope of her work is admirable, I found that she tried to do too much without going too deeply into each theme—I found myself agreeing a lot with Smith’s points, but she never made me reconsider any of those subjects in a new light. She also seemed to be using her characters as a way to make her points, and it was so heavy-handed I couldn’t enjoy it.
The third part was just... okay. All the plot points converged here in a rather predictable way. Here, many of the tension-filled scenes actually play out on the page, and it WAS entertaining, but again just very predictable in a soap-opera sort of way.
I won’t be opposed to reading Smith’s other works, and I still definitely plan to read her essays and short pieces, but On Beauty just didn’t work for me on so many levels. Bleh. If anything I’m relieved it’s finally over.
I like Smith as a person, but I just didn’t like this book. It’s probably one of the most uneven books I’ve read. The first part was so poorly constructed that I almost DNF’ed it. Smith throws us in the middle of what is meant to be a dramatic occurrence but without sufficient context for us to appreciate the drama, so I was lost for 50 pages or so. I could have tolerated this had the characters been interesting, but they were insufferable. I couldn’t understand why they were acting the way they did, and the dialogue was cringe-worthy, highly stylized, and artificial. In terms of storytelling, Smith preferred to tell the readers about the most dramatic moments after they’d happened, instead of showing them on the page. I can recall more descriptions of FURNITURE rather than actual drama in the first part.
The second part was better, which is saying something, because books hardly get better for me once I’ve spent 100+ pages disliking them. I was surprised actually highlighting for an interesting turn of phrase or insight rather than out of spite. It’s in the second part that Smith really tackles her themes—race, class, beauty, liberalism and conservatism, the utter pretentiousness and impenetrability of academia, etc. While the scope of her work is admirable, I found that she tried to do too much without going too deeply into each theme—I found myself agreeing a lot with Smith’s points, but she never made me reconsider any of those subjects in a new light. She also seemed to be using her characters as a way to make her points, and it was so heavy-handed I couldn’t enjoy it.
The third part was just... okay. All the plot points converged here in a rather predictable way. Here, many of the tension-filled scenes actually play out on the page, and it WAS entertaining, but again just very predictable in a soap-opera sort of way.
I won’t be opposed to reading Smith’s other works, and I still definitely plan to read her essays and short pieces, but On Beauty just didn’t work for me on so many levels. Bleh. If anything I’m relieved it’s finally over.