The story In the Hand of the Goddess rushes through Alanna's squirehood, her Ordeal, and the final confrontation with Duke Roger the Evil Sorcerer. It concludes her journey to become a knight with a bit of a whimper rather than a bang. We see our loyal Lady Knight getting ready to head south for her own adventures, which I'm really excited about.
1. Alanna's secret isn't truly hers to disclose as she doesn't get to reveal it to the king, queen, and the court on her own terms, nor does she tell Jonathan in the way she might have liked. Her lack of agency in this regard is rather unappealing to me.
2. I'm left wondering why Gary is the one Alanna tells her secret to, especially since it seems mostly because Jonathan chooses him for her. This is exactly what I meant by Alanna's selfishness. At this stage of the story, is there really a difference between Gary and Raoul? Yes, there's more development in later books, but here and now, as she faces her Ordeal, why does she pick Gary? What sets him apart from the others?
3. lskdjfldjk JONATHAN. I wish I could have liked this story arc more. I long for a heroine to have a romance that doesn't end in a happily ever after but remains a healthy, loving relationship instead of being a "learning opportunity" for her future hero. But I really didn't like this relationship at all. Part of the problem is that it develops when Alanna is still serving as Jonathan's squire. She makes several remarks about how her life is his, not out of romantic love but because she is his liege. Her exploration of why she wants to be his lover is based on jealousy and is half-dismissed due to her own fear. It never goes beyond the surface level. It feels extraordinarily shallow and easy, more like she's not really choosing to be with Jonathan romantically but rather that he's available and she's curious.
4. Regarding that relationship, up until she decides to open her door for him, all the physical manifestations of attraction are imposed on Alanna. She's kissed several times without her permission, hugged, and touched. She doesn't initiate any of it, which makes her decision to take Jon as her lover seem to come out of nowhere. Also, when Alanna describes Jonathan's tantrums, they come across as dangerous and manipulative. She has to follow all these rules he sets, which is not cool behavior. I'm still really uncomfortable with this relationship.
5. AHAHA STUPID ROGER.
6. OH THOM.
I had a thought: I remember from an interview with Pierce several years ago that the Alanna Quartet was originally supposed to be one novel, but publishers at the time didn't think a larger book would sell, so she was asked to break her original manuscript into pieces. From my current perspective in the middle of the arc, I'm curious about the impact this has on the flow of the story.
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While I found this second book to have more thrills than the first one, I did sense that there were some elements lacking, albeit only to a small extent. For starters, I firmly believe that these books are far too concise considering they are high fantasy adventures. There is insufficient space for world building, which is a pity because the world the author has fabricated here holds great potential to be as captivating and enigmatic as Middle Earth. In this installment, we are introduced to a goddess about whom we have absolutely no backstory and no clues regarding how the belief system in this world functions. Additionally, we encounter a purple-eyed cat that is also regarded as special in the eyes of the goddess, yet we have no inkling as to why. Will we discover the answers in subsequent books? I'm certainly eager to find out.
In this book, the passage of time for our main character occurs very rapidly, with her transforming from a young teenager to a young adult in just a few pages. Once again, I must state that I relished all the adventure and thrills these books have to offer, as well as one of my favorite female characters in the realm of fantasy. Alanna herself remained as resolute and courageous as ever, even when her secret was unveiled at the end. Although I had anticipated it, it was still handled in a very adept manner, leaving me pondering what will become of her in the next book.
So overall, this was still a worthy addition to a well-crafted series. I simply wish the books could be more extensive, thereby providing more room for world and character development, as both possess significant potential here.