I am a die-hard Feist fan, and I have followed his works with great enthusiasm. However, this particular series has been a source of frustration for me. There are several issues that have detracted from my enjoyment of it.
One of the major problems is the errors in the time lines. It can be quite jarring when events seem to occur out of sequence or when there are contradictions in the chronology. This lack of attention to detail makes it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story.
Another issue is that the author seems to repeat himself at times. Some of the themes and plot elements feel recycled, which gives the series a sense of déjà vu. I was hoping for more originality and fresh ideas.
The style of writing also leaves something to be desired. It doesn't have the same sparkle and polish as all the previous series. The prose feels a bit flat and unengaging, which makes it a struggle to get through some of the chapters.
Luckily, there is a glimmer of hope. The very last book in the series shows some improvement. The story becomes more engaging, and the author seems to have addressed some of the issues that plagued the earlier installments. While it may not be enough to completely redeem the series, it does give me some hope for Feist's future works.
A fan of Feist's setting and world imagination will absolutely love the stuff being introduced and painted here. It expands far beyond Midkemia and Kelewan, opening up a whole new realm of possibilities and adventures.
To start with a rant though, some of the bad things from the previous book carried over. There are repetitive descriptions of a character's trait or behavior. It's as if the author feels the need to explicitly remind the reader of it every few chapters. This can be quite tiresome and takes away from the overall reading experience. The proofreading also left something to be desired, primarily towards the end. There were obvious grammatical mistakes and missing words, which could have been easily caught with a more thorough edit.
Still, ignoring those flaws, the plot did not fail to be engaging. It was great seeing new characters being introduced, each with their own unique personalities and backstories. However, the existing cast didn't get much development. We only got to see what happened to them, rather than truly understanding their growth and evolution. Despite placing most of them in supposedly dangerous situations, I couldn't really get any feeling of suspense. None of them appeared to be in any real danger, which made the story feel a bit flat at times. And all those "things that are happening" are really the essence of the book - setting things up until the third book. This was nailed in with the book having no real finale to it, leaving the reader eager for more.
The pace of all the plot lines is good, and it keeps the reader engaged and wanting to turn the page. Each chapter jumps around several plot lines, perhaps a little too often. It's not enough to throw the reader off, but it is just noticeably frequent. This can make it a bit difficult to keep track of everything that's going on, but it also adds to the excitement and unpredictability of the story.
Overall, I enjoyed this book. It's better than the first book and the previous trilogy in terms of being engaging. It may not be a huge improvement, but it's a step in the right direction. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes in the next book.