What to start with? First of all, between me and James Patterson was "The Quickie". After this quick and short reading, I realized that I don't really like the way the author writes and then I forgot about him.
Recently, I decided (like any woman changes her mind) to give him another chance (like any woman makes a mistake) and I started to read the present novel. Again, I realized that it didn't disappoint me. My problem is that I still have another book written by him and I don't know what to do... if you have it, you should read it, right? Of course it's not my choice...
Seriously, I want to offer some reasons why I didn't like this reading:
The first thing I noticed is that each chapter has one, two, at most three pages, which annoys me because it seems to me that it fragments the narration too much. Although now writing is simplified and reading is as easy as possible, it doesn't seem useful or aesthetic to me.
Then there is that kind of detective novel in which, after 10 pages, we already know who the criminal is because the author chooses to reveal it to us and thus we participate with him in all the crimes, instead of putting the clues together and finding out who it is.
Another thing I didn't like is that it has a modern concept being very girl-power. We are dealing with 4 successful, independent, career-oriented, idealistic women and I wonder where the ordinary housewives, the exhausted mothers or the housewives who work all day like ants have gone? Practically, nowadays, if a woman is not a CEO somewhere, she doesn't exist and I don't understand this aggressive promotion and the society's demand that a woman be successful by any means.
The book abounds in many clichés about weddings, wedding dresses, honeymoons and all kinds of related traditions. All these hardships make me think that if I ever took the step, I would prefer to run away to an isolated place, in an empty church and without guests.
Also, the main heroine, Inspector Lindsay Boxer has a weakness for men with "soft hands", so every time she meets one, she first asks if the respective man has this. Even when she makes love to them, she is concerned about this aspect. Of course I wonder what soft hands mean and what you do if the man is a carpenter and has calluses on his hands or is a "lumberjack", because it's all very trendy now.
Although I can very well tolerate violence and the morbid details, in this novel I found that some details are too disturbing and I didn't understand their purpose. The criminal, for example, chooses to perform a sexual gesture that I prefer not to reveal here because it is too stupid and degrading. Besides that, when he makes love to his wife, besides the fact that he hits her, he forces her to say "ham-ham-ham". Why? God knows...
As a conclusion, I would recommend you not to waste too much time with this book, go straight to "The Quickie"! :)
Too farfetched for me. A serial killer is on the loose in San Francisco, murdering brides and bridegrooms. The main character is the head of detectives, who has a life-threatening disease and decides to have an affair with her partner Chris. Chris is literally perfect, a man's fantasy of what he thinks is a perfect man for a woman. Apparently, the murderer is a famous novelist with no redeeming features at all, except for his ability to manipulate his wives to go on a murder spree. The motive is that his ex-wife is only getting $5000 a month alimony instead of a share of his millions. This is a very weak motive to murder several people.
The detective club of four women is ridiculous. There's a reporter and a cop. The coroner I can believe, but a lawyer as well? The ending was so silly, with Jenks coming back to murder Boxer.
However, the whole story is readable. If you suspend belief, it can be entertaining and in places even laugh out loud, such as Jenks' escape. I also thought the love scenes with Chris and Boxer at the sports game and elsewhere were ridiculously over the top. Overall, it's an okay read, but not without its flaws.
Between 4 and 4.5 stars.
I have now delved into five books penned by James Patterson. Two of them were merely average, and one I unfortunately had to abandon. However, "Roses are Red" from the Alex Cross series was an absolute delight for me and had hitherto held the top position among my JP reads. Now, it has been surpassed by "1st to Die", which serves as the world's introduction to the Women's Murder Club.
Just like all of Patterson's books, the pacing was unyielding. It was filled with non-stop action right up until the very last page. And every bit of that action seemed relevant, captivating my attention and making me feel as if real progress was being made in a grisly serial murder case that targeted brand new newlyweds.
I took a great liking to the protagonist, Lindsay Boxer. Although she does read like a woman cop as written by a man, she is on the better side of that spectrum. There were a few cliched and pandering/forced moments, but for the most part, she came across as determined, driven, courageous, and human. Her counterparts, Cindy, Claire, and Jill, were also engaging and interesting characters. Their dialogues together were truly great.
The reveal at the end was somewhat predictable. In fact, I didn't guess it precisely because it seemed too obvious. So, I suppose that counts as me "not seeing it coming", right? And the final, final twist was not as shocking as it was meant to be. In terms of the mystery aspect, that part I would have to label as a bit disappointing.
The best elements of this book were the characters themselves, the fast-paced action of solving the crime, and Lindsay's personal storyline, including the romance aspect. I actually felt that this was a nice addition to the book. Some other reviewers may not concur, but considering the genre, I thought it was well executed.
Both of the Patterson books that I have enjoyed the most hail from his back catalog rather than his newer works. I look forward to reuniting with the Murder Club in book 2 in the future and seeing how far I continue this exciting ride with them!