I was truly torn. Was I more captivated by the Gothic thriller aspect or the complex jalebi of the prose? It was a prose that was truly - truly - labyrinthine. James uses it with great effect for the purpose of dissimulation. (Later, people would call it 'unreliable narration.') You can trust James to phrase even the simplest ideas and situations in the most imaginative ways without making you feel foolish. But if you still demand clarity, then tell us: did the governess really see the ghost or was it all just a figment of her overexcited imagination? In any case, this is one of the finest examples of a story where the writing style itself suggests ideas to the reader without stating anything concretely.
I read it (or reread it) in one sitting. My heart was racing, my underarms were damp, and probably my blood pressure shot up too, if only metaphorically. No, it wasn't the horror. Horror films don't scare me, let alone the written word. I realized early on that it was the pressure of the prose bearing down on my soul. Its gravity was many times greater than that of the earth. I couldn't tear myself away until I had finished, panting. It was like being on a treadmill inclined upwards. You're making the effort but not going anywhere and can't rest your legs until the segment is over and your muscles are fully exercised.
This novella is like a literary treadmill.
June '16.