Paranormal Activity 6 : The Turn of the Screw
01:25 17th AUGUST 1895 : THE GOVERNESS’ BEDROOM

04:55 23RD AUGUST 1895 : FROM THE WINDOW OF THE MAIN STAIRCASE

Anyway, this is a great story. However, I must mention three STYLISTIC ISSUES that might bother the less patient reader.
1) In The Turn of the Screw, as in many of HJ’s works, people have a tendency to finish each other’s sentences. For example, “But aren’t they all – “ “Sent home? Yes.” (P33). This style can create a sense of anticipation and connection between the characters, but it might also seem a bit artificial to some readers.
2) People often answer questions with questions and avoid giving a straight answer. For instance, “Do you fear for them?” “Don’t you?” (P47). This can add an element of mystery and uncertainty to the story, but it might also frustrate readers who are looking for clear answers.
3) Being Henry James means using sentences of remarkable opacity when readers least expect it. For example, “He never wrote to them – that may have been selfish, but it was part of the flattery of his trust of myself; for the way in which a man pays his highest tribute to a woman is apt to be but by the more festal celebration of one of the sacred laws of his comfort.” (P82). These complex sentences can be challenging to understand, but they also add depth and nuance to the story.
Anyhow, whatever, this is a P Bryant Must Read.
Footnote :
For Screw fans, here's my follow-up review of all the lovely theories about it:
http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...