A story that explores the meaning of self and whether we truly know ourselves or not. And do others see us as we are or as they want us to be? Does our outer appearance match our inner personality?!!
The idea of the story is ingenious and the beginning is good. But as I delved deeper into it, I felt a great deal of boredom and a lack of coherence in some parts. In my opinion, the author was focused on the idea and what lies behind it, rather than caring about the overall structure of the story.
Perhaps the author could have spent more time developing the characters and their relationships to make the story more engaging. Or maybe worked on improving the flow and transitions between different scenes. Nevertheless, the central concept of the story is thought-provoking and has the potential to be a great piece of literature with some further refinement.