Bellow acolytes beware, for your emperor lacks clothes and it's mightily cold outside. However, it's not quite as bad as that. Bellow isn't abysmal. In fact, if I could on goodreads.com, I'd award this novel around 2 1/2 stars. There are certain stretches in 'The Adventures of Augie March' where he's really good, gracefully treading philosophical waters like a crane, much like in his first novel 'Dangling Man' and sporadically in his 'Collected Stories'. But as I read Augie March, two very telling Charles Bukowski quotes came to mind.
The first Bukowski quote references Truman Capote, whom he accused of merely 'ice-skating' in terms of his literary output. This, to me, exemplifies Bellow in some spots. He presents wonderful philosophical ideas and quotes or references great minds and historical moments, drawing on his extensive reading in various disciplines. But he doesn't seem to do much with these borrowed ideas. They're piled on his characters to show their knowledge, but for most of the cast, it feels out of place. Seriously, how many of the diverse characters he portrays can hold court on so many esoteric topics and also sling out yiddish slang? And then ask about your conversational latin?
To quote Mark Hamill to George Lucas, allegedly: \\"(Real) People don't talk like this.\\" The second Bukowski quote, which can be read as the antithesis to Bellow's authorial ethos, is that 'true genius may be saying a complicated thing in a simple way'. It seems that Bellow, like the Stephan Fry of his day, takes a hundred words to say what two or three could easily accomplish and is proud of it. I understand his verbose style, but his delineations, while often gorgeous, drag his text down. Characters think, talk, and describe a lot, but don't actually do, accomplish, or evolve much. It's like a hurricane in a desolate field that disrupts and destroys but leaves only a slightly put off patch of land when it dissipates.
I said it before in my 'Collected Stories' review, and it's true here too: Bellow's authorial voice strains under the lash of too many influences. And I can now add that his voice seems fake, or at least too practiced, cultivated, and prepared. It's like a dance at too many weddings, trying to be all things to all people all the time. I was reminded of Kerouac's struggle to find his voice in 'On the Road'. The difference is that Kerouac found his voice and developed it, while Bellow, unfortunately, yoked together a voice that collapsed under the weight of its own intellect and confused aspirations. In the 'Paris Review' interview, Bellow discussed his slavery to traditional novelistic forms and his need to prove himself to the Anglo-Saxon literary establishment. This revelation rang true for me, given my own ethnic and cultural background.
But Bellow's voice in 'Augie March', while initially enthusiastic, runs out of steam as the novel progresses. The further you get, the more you can feel his desperation to declare, declare, declare, while only piling on more ideas, fancies, and theories onto a character who can't decide or break free. And this doesn't even begin to address the stylistic mess of the novel. Tonally, it's all over the place, often ensconced in whimsy and old fart sentimentalism, which is why his comparisons to Dostoyevsky ring false to me. After the 1929 stock market crash, one sentence references people jumping to their deaths, while Augie goes to Mexico to train an eagle to catch iguanas. In what universe is that considered 'realist'?
And speaking of realism and Theodore Dreiser, whom Bellow admires, in 'Sister Carrie', the ending shows Carrie having succeeded materially but dying spiritually, sitting in a rocking chair going nowhere. This was Augie March for the most part, to me. I don't hate Saul Bellow as a writer. He's good in spots, but the intensity of this review is directed more at the accolades he's received and the defensiveness of some of his fans. Leo Tolstoy, one of the greatest literary minds, openly admitted that he didn't 'get' Shakespeare. So, basically, there. Jewish Literature is a labyrinth, and Bellow's voice is different, but so far, it's not one I'd favor. There are many other great voices in Jewish Literature, and Bellow is part of this company, but not in its upper echelon. Maybe after some time, I'll be more than happy to listen to his voice again.
Saul Bellow's name was only vaguely familiar to me. However, I must thank Goodreads once again for helping me discover a great book. After seeing "Augie March" on one of my friend's 5-star lists and reading a highly positive review by another friend, I decided to give it a try.
The first few pages confirmed what Eric had said. Since reading Nabokov, I hadn't been so impressed by language. Nabokov's sentences are long, often meandering, yet intensely vivid and smooth. Bellow's sentences are also long and vivid, but in a unique way that I initially described as "tornad-ic" due to the unusual organization of appositives and clauses. Every time a new character is introduced, Bellow unleashes a cyclone of description, leaving no room for indirect characterization. For example:
"Mostly for the satisfaction of dexterity, though Stashu invented the game of stripping in the cellar and putting on girl’s things swiped from clotheslines. Then he too showed up in a gang that caught me one cold afternoon of very little snow while I was sitting on a crate frozen into the mud, eating Nabisco wafers, my throat full of the sweet dust. Foremost, there was a thug of a kid, about thirteen but undersized, hard and grieved-looking" (11).
"Their families were trying to get them out, but in the meantime they had been shipped to Nicaragua and were fighting Sandino and the rebels. She grieved terribly, as if he were dead already. And as she had great size and terrific energy of constitution she produced all kinds of excesses. Even physical ones: moles, blebs, hairs, bumps in her forehead, huge concentration in her neck; she had spiraling reddish hair springing with no negligible beauty and definiteness springing from her scalp, tangling as it widened out, cut duck-tail fashion in the back and scrawled out high above her ears. Originally strong, her voice was crippled by weeping and asthma, and the whites of her eyes coppery from the same causes, a burning, morose face, piteous, and her spirit untamed by thoughts or the remote considerations that can reconcile people to awfuler luck than she had" (16).
These are just two examples from the beginning of the book, but I could have easily found many more by opening it at random.
The story simply recounts the life of Augie March, an American born in Chicago. Augie admits early on that he doesn't have a single purpose but is more diffuse. What follows is an entertaining account of all the adventures and life-paths that Augie ends up on. Although some of these paths are extraordinary, Bellow manages to make the reader relate to them. I, for example, have never been a falconer, but I could understand getting into something new because of a girlfriend's interest. I've also never tried to transport illegal immigrants, but I can recall doing dumb or illegal things because of friends' suggestions.
In addition to being an enjoyable read, this book made me think about how much the people in our lives influence the course of our lives. A favorite quotation from the book is: "Metaphor for being well-read: 'I still had the craving I had given in to all summer long when I had lived on books, to have the reach to grasp both ends of the frame and turn the big image-taking glass to any scene of the world'" (274).
This novel didn't disappoint my expectations, and it is the one that contributed to its author, "Saul Bellow," winning the Nobel Prize in 1976.
It is truly great in its theme and its essence, rich and full of the colors of life. And although it starts from a very traditional American reality, yet it addresses all of us as humans. We strive in this life to search for ourselves.
This doesn't mean that the novel is artistically traditional. Rather, it is a point where multiple techniques from different literary genres converge, and I didn't know that I would encounter such beauty.
The protagonist of the novel, "Augie," tries to flee from the great void of idleness that hit the American and global economy in the 1930s of the last century. He begins a comprehensive geographical journey within America, searching not only for a livelihood but also for the meaning of the American dream and for his identity as a young man living between the boundaries of conflicting cultures and mentalities and different ways of life.
Augie was more honest than one could ever need, and more real than reality could bear. Thus, he couldn't find himself in a civilized and hypocritical world with double standards.
It's a philosophical and social novel that combines simplicity and depth. We follow the journey of Augie March, the simple young man who was born and raised in Chicago during the Great Depression until World War II. He is seeking his way in this life, experienced to the point of naivety, moving from one job to another and from one relationship to another, trying to reach a reality that matches his thoughts, dreams, and principles that stem from his conscience, his high sensitivity, and his idealistic view of life. And between this and that, he falls into the crisis of confusion caused by a reality full of tricks, corruption, and exploitation, and the values that he was raised with and absorbed in his childhood from his environment and readings.
Every person he met in his life, from his grandmother to a simple servant, each one gave him a range of knowledge and pushed him towards a great and wide experience. Yet, his life was unstable, fluctuating, approaching a goal and then retreating, moving away from it, due to his sensitive personality that craves perfection that is not attainable. Augie went through many adventures to discover the truth at a high price, which pushed him in his days and years and made him feel that even if you live your life, you will need to contradict yourself and your principles sometimes and make many sacrifices, because life is not a stage for idealism.
The conversations in the novel are among the best, with a lot of depth in analyzing human beings, analyzing society and its situations, and discussing many existential issues. It's a great novel that I highly recommend.
I have delved deep into the works of the magnificent writer Samuel Elkin in recent years. Noting that he admires and likens his own writing to that of William H. Gass and Saul Bellow, whom he prizes as "stylists," I find myself returning to Saul Bellow. I haven't appraised his writing since my teenage years, and even then, I only read a single book. Clearly, all writers have a style and ways to work it out within adaptable parameters. But what Elkin means by characterizing certain writers as stylists is that they are highly attentive to the possibilities of language and the marvelous performances that can be crafted sentence by sentence.
If Bellow isn't quite as exuberant as Elkin, there's no denying that both present the reader with closely related, highly idiomatic language full of superhuman pizzazz and infectious bonhomie. These writers are attuned to the joys of language and much else in bittersweet life. In both cases, we're talking about language and life in post-war America. In Bellow's works, a person isn't just fired; they're given the "shove-ho." Idiom is like a playset for freewheeling delights.
If you're inclined to pay a belated visit to Bellow's America (and beyond), it makes sense to get a copy of THE ADVENTURES OF AUGIE MARCH. It's his third novel, his most epic, and almost certainly his most highly esteemed. You don't have to take my word for it. Penguin seems to think you might listen to Martin Amis and Salman Rushdie, who both praise AUGIE as a top candidate for THE Great American Novel. This tells you that you're in for something more than just refined language virtuosity. It's something locally universal, expansive, epic, and bordering on perfection.
The Penguin Classics edition also has a lovely introduction by Christopher Hitchens. He compares a passage from AUGIE MARCH, where the hero meditates while looking out over an American body of water, with one from THE GREAT GATSBY. Hitchens concludes that while both men have endured flawed and wretched humanity, Carraway finds only consolation in meditation, while Augie finds inspiration. It's a beautiful observation that reveals something crucial. Hitchens' essay is very fine, and I won't quote it further. I'll even try not to quote passages from THE ADVENTURES OF AUGIE MARCH that he's already covered.
Hitchens shares valuable insights into the novel's themes, such as social mobility, the sensibility of good-humored ironic opposition, Napoleon's legacy, and the idea that a man's destiny can be his guiding principle. The novel is about Augie's relationship with his destiny. "My mind was already dwelling on a good enough fate," he says early on, and variations of this recur. The name Augie March is like a beautiful little poem about destiny and its pursuit. Bellow loves his words and uses them masterfully.
Opposition is another important theme. Einhorn, a wheelchair-bound man, tells young Augie, "You've got opposition in you." But this isn't the opposition of a pugilist; it's that of a no-nonsense student of life. A person with a good-natured ironic opposition can be serious about their destiny but not too serious. There must always be a grain of salt. Agonies also play a role, especially a young man's romantic ones. But from these, things must bloom, and the call to move forward must be heeded. You can't keep a good man down, especially if he's strengthened by stubborn opposition and resilient humor.
Thea Fenchel, Augie's first true love, may send him into a codependent tailspin and leave him heartbroken, but she also leads him to Stella and the ironist's delighted picture of "the god Eros holding me down with his foot and forcing all kinds of impossible stuff on me." Hitchens is right that it's no accident that the word "Adventure" appears on the cover of Bellow's novel, like in a Mark Twain picaresque. Destiny involves many jobs, travels, a host of amusing American grotesques, multiple stations, and an awakening to the connoisseurship of spiritual and material abundances.
We follow young Augie from his impoverished boyhood in Chicago through the Depression, to Mexico with a rich girl and a feckless eagle, to war, marriage, and international business. It's the first three decades or so of an exemplary life. We meet a Dickensian profusion of people, like Steve the Sailor Bulba, Gillaume the dog groomer, Bluegren the mob-connected florist, and the Commissioner. There's also a boxer with "slum motions of deadliness" and the irascible Grandma Lausch. Trotsky makes a brief appearance in the Mexican section, and Louie Fu, the owner of a Chinese restaurant in Central Mexico, has a great name.
Augie, our guide through all this, refers to himself at one point as a "runner after good things, servant of love, embarker on schemes, recruit of sublime ideas, and good-time Charlie!" He believes in life, primarily at the level of intuition. His bearing entreats kindnesses from man and larger patterns. He can't seem to hold a grudge, even against his brother Simon. "Finding yourself among warm faces, why, there're many objections that recede, as when enemy women may kiss." I like to learn about novels from novels, and I'm inspired to write them myself. But I'm not alone in wanting to learn about life from novels. If you're interested in the novel and in life, if you're hankering for a literary formula that might serve you, if adventure means more to you than a map and compass, then THE ADVENTURES OF AUGIE MARCH is for you. It has its reputation because it went out there, devoured life, and earned it, my friend.