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This was the first Updike book I read. Undoubtedly, it is evident that he is a highly skilled writer. However, when considering the book as a whole, I was left rather unimpressed. The dialogue within the story struck me as being excessively lengthy and overly didactic. It seemed to drone on at times, lacking the natural flow and spontaneity that one would expect in a good narrative. Moreover, the pacing of the book was quite slow. The story seemed to plod along, lacking the necessary momentum to keep me fully engaged. I also had issues with the characterization. It was inconsistent and rather odd. For instance, the main character, who was American-born and educated, typically spoke in an extremely formal manner, almost like an ESL student. This was perplexing as it did not seem to align with his background. Adding to the confusion, there were occasions when he would suddenly use more casual slang for no apparent reason. Another aspect that I found hard to understand was the main character's attitude towards his peers' overt sexuality. He was apparently intolerant of it. However, he was completely fine with crude locker-room talk from a Moslem fundamentalist work buddy. This seemed rather contradictory. Why wouldn't he be disgusted and disillusioned, especially if he regarded this person as a religious compatriot? Although the plot twist at the end was very interesting, it was not enough to make up for the arduous trudge through the rest of the book. Overall, while Updike's writing skills are undeniable, this particular book failed to live up to my expectations.