A little rough around the edges, yet still a decent read. The main problem, as I perceive it, is that this novel holds so much greater potential. The last half of it appeared to be rushed, and there was scarcely enough time dedicated to Baal. It would be truly wonderful to witness a rewrite from McCammon at this point, considering he now has more experience as an author. Even in its current state, though, it is indeed worth a read.
Perhaps with a rewrite, McCammon could flesh out the story more fully, explore the character of Baal in greater depth, and give the latter half of the novel the attention it deserves. This would enhance the overall reading experience and allow the readers to fully immerse themselves in the world he has created. Despite its flaws, the novel still manages to engage the reader and leave them with a sense of curiosity and anticipation for what could have been. It serves as a testament to McCammon's talent as an author, even in his earlier works.
I should mention that this is my first encounter with Robert R McCammon. As I strive to expand my horror literary landscape, I'm delving into works by some of the genre's most prominent figures. So far, I've been quite impressed with Graham Masterton, Adam Neville, and Richard Laymon. Now, it's McCammon's turn with 'Baal'.
The cover synopsis intrigues. It starts with a heinous rape in New York City. Nine months later, a truly extraordinary child named Jeffrey Harper Raines is born. Soon, he assumes his true identity and purpose as Baal, a new incarnation of the ancient prince of demons. The story chronicles his deadly path through the 20th century, beginning with the destruction of his earthly "family", then moving to a doomed Catholic orphanage where he unleashes unprecedented carnage, and finally out into the wider world as the Prophet of the Damned, leaving a trail of chaos, violence, and despair.
So, was I impressed? Well, sort of. Don't misunderstand, this is a good book - not outstanding, but not bad either. Just good. In fairness, I believe this was not only McCammon's debut novel but also, as I recall reading somewhere, the first story he deliberately sat down to write. Despite this, while reading, it's easy to think McCammon had been writing for some time when he penned 'Baal'. He narrates with confidence and assurance, and his prose is often eloquent, yet also sharp and to the point like a knife.
The story is told in the third person from multiple points of view, following the rise of Jeffrey, an unwanted child born of a horrific rape, who evolves into Baal, the personification of the Canaanite god of death and fertility. The book is divided into three sections. The first details Jeffrey's violent conception and infancy, and then his boyhood as an increasingly malevolent entity at a Catholic boys' home. This section is riveting, with confrontations with nuns and priests offering a chilling glimpse into the fully-formed mind of Baal within Jeffrey's body. The scares are vividly visualized, and the few violent scenes are brutal. The creepiness and tension build throughout this first section.
The second, middle section focuses on a theology tutor, Naughton, investigating the growing Baal cult in the Middle East and his journey there to experience the cult and its enigmatic leader firsthand. This section is a bit slower, despite the disturbing events in the cult's camp. It does build up to a chilling sequence towards the end during the first mass congregation in Baal's desert-camp temple. However, the story seems to meander in the earlier part of this section, and while the author tries to give a good sense of the desert environment, I found myself skimming some paragraphs to get to the more exciting parts.
The third and final section details the journey of Naughton's university superior and friend, Dr Virga, as he assists a mysterious man named Michael in their quest to stop Baal's可怕 plans. Again, this section has some gruesome sequences, especially those involving dead kids, which were difficult to read but understandable given Baal's history of child sacrifice. The story ramps up in tension and action towards the final battle, but the journey there is a bit meandering, like the previous section. Many parts of this third section were gripping, and any parts related to Baal himself were truly creepy, but there were also quite a few skimmable paragraphs about the frozen Arctic environment. To be fair, it did build up to a climactic finish - an ending that felt real, plausible, and satisfying, which is somewhat rare in horror.
McCammon's dialogue is enjoyable, with conversations flowing naturally. However, I didn't feel there was much character development beyond that of young Jeffrey/Baal. The story was generally engaging, and you do feel fear and concern for the small cast, and you find yourself rooting for Michael, Virga, and the wonderful Zark near the end. Baal himself is a great antagonist - truly evil and depraved, yet cold and calculating. On the other hand, other than Zark, the protagonists all felt a bit weak, especially Virga and Naughton, who sometimes seemed like the same character.
But I shouldn't complain too much. This was McCammon's first novel, and if its only drawbacks are occasional meandering and skimmable sections and a couple of weak protagonists, then it's not so bad. McCammon's research and world-building are excellent, and the whole concept and how the events unfold feel very real and plausible, which adds to the weight of the story and makes the stakes seem even higher.
Overall, 'Baal' is an enjoyable horror novel with a great villain and a generally engaging story, despite some meandering sequences and a couple of uninteresting heroes. I'm looking forward to reading more of McCammon's works.
3 / 5