Usually, I am an ardent admirer of Dan Simmons. His works have always managed to captivate my imagination and keep me on the edge of my seat. However, this particular book failed to have the same effect on me.
I struggled to stay engaged with the rather peculiar tone that Simmons employed throughout the narrative. It was a strange concoction of being half serious and half not serious, which made it difficult for me to fully invest in the story. I found it hard to believe the events and characters as they were presented, as the tone seemed to undermine the credibility of the whole thing.
Moreover, the spy elements in the book felt a bit overwhelming. There was just too much happening too quickly, and I craved a slower pace. I needed more time to soak in the details and understand the complex web of espionage that was being woven. It's a pity because, despite these flaws, the book still had its interesting moments and ideas.
Talk about a concept that sells itself: Ernest Hemingway battles Nazis spies in Cuba during World War II. Who wouldn’t pay money to see that fight? In this historical fiction, based on Hemingway’s activities in the Caribbean during the war, Joe Lucas, an FBI agent, has been busting up Nazi intelligence networks across North America since Pearl Harbor. But he is given a special assignment by J. Edgar Hoover himself.
Ernest Hemingway has convinced the US ambassador to Cuba to give him authorization and funding to set up his own network of spies, which he calls the Crook Factory, to root out Nazi infiltrators on the island. Hoover sends the reluctant Lucas to spy on Hemingway, pretending to be his government liaison. Lucas is not happy about being taken off his high-profile assignments to babysit the famous writer and can’t understand why Hoover cares.
As a writer, Hemingway doesn’t impress Lucas, who doesn’t even read fiction. Lucas also doesn’t think much of Hemingway as a spy ringleader. He finds Hemingway’s loose network of Cuban workers and drinking buddies laughable and Hemingway himself a boastful overgrown child playing spy games. Lucas is horrified when Hemingway comes up with a crazy scheme to outfit his fishing boat with small arms and other equipment to try to lure a Nazi sub to the surface and capture it, and convinces the government to go along with it.
However, Lucas soon realizes that there are many serious spies around Hemingway’s Crook Factory, including British agent Ian Fleming. He starts to think that he and Hemingway are being set up in someone else’s operation. As Lucas has to depend on the writer, he discovers that there is more to Hemingway than his larger-than-life image. Dan Simmons’ writing in this novel is both impressive and flawed. He can shift between different genres with ease, but in this historical fiction, he tries to include every detail he has researched, which sometimes slows down the pace of the story.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed this novel for its depiction of Hemingway, which seems to confirm what his critics say but also manages to go beyond that to give a more complex portrait of the artist. The afterward, where Simmons reveals that the government files on the Crook Factory are still classified and that Hoover’s FBI maintained surveillance on Hemingway until his death, adds an interesting layer to the story. Overall, it’s an interesting premise with a fascinating portrayal of Hemingway and lots of spy intrigue, but it could have been paced better with less detail.