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The big plot thing just sort of bores me which is why I hate James Bond and Jason Bourne. Why does everything have to be some huge geopolitical maneuver? Whenever the story started hashing out the “Crepuscular” (rhymes with Treadstone) angle my eyes started rolling back in my head and I couldn’t wait for another action scene. For my tastes the more complicated the plot the stupider it is.
He is much too casual with killing in these first two books. Rain murders a CIA agent in full view of another agent simply because they were following him. So he’s going to incur the full wrath of the world’s largest spy agency simply to make a point to the other agent he is interrogating? It doesn’t make much sense.
When he goes to the underground dojo to train and breaks the guy’s ankle was pretty stupid. I don’t care how hardcore your training you won’t get very far if both people are out to hurt the other. A broken ankle isn’t like a black eye or a fat lip; it’s a career-ending injury and not something anyone who isn’t a sociopath would inflict on someone they are training with, even if there are “no rules.” I’ve only met one fighter in my life (and never even heard of another) who probably wouldn’t hesitate to go toe-to-toe with anyone in the world: Rickson Gracie. I’ve spent a few years deconstructing the martial arts myself and when it comes to randori, or sparing, or whatever you want to call it you just never really know what might happen. I’ve beaten dudes much, much better and infinitely stronger than I am, at least once in a while but just enough to give them pause. Sometimes you just get lucky.
For the life of me I don’t understand why the author has bothered to change the titles of these books as both the old and new titles aren’t very good or reveal much concerning the contents of the individual novel.
He is much too casual with killing in these first two books. Rain murders a CIA agent in full view of another agent simply because they were following him. So he’s going to incur the full wrath of the world’s largest spy agency simply to make a point to the other agent he is interrogating? It doesn’t make much sense.
When he goes to the underground dojo to train and breaks the guy’s ankle was pretty stupid. I don’t care how hardcore your training you won’t get very far if both people are out to hurt the other. A broken ankle isn’t like a black eye or a fat lip; it’s a career-ending injury and not something anyone who isn’t a sociopath would inflict on someone they are training with, even if there are “no rules.” I’ve only met one fighter in my life (and never even heard of another) who probably wouldn’t hesitate to go toe-to-toe with anyone in the world: Rickson Gracie. I’ve spent a few years deconstructing the martial arts myself and when it comes to randori, or sparing, or whatever you want to call it you just never really know what might happen. I’ve beaten dudes much, much better and infinitely stronger than I am, at least once in a while but just enough to give them pause. Sometimes you just get lucky.
For the life of me I don’t understand why the author has bothered to change the titles of these books as both the old and new titles aren’t very good or reveal much concerning the contents of the individual novel.