“You think a new born know what it all means? It just happens … awareness comes later, if it comes at all.” This thought-provoking statement sets the tone for a story that is a well-told mélange of science and speculative fiction, with a touch of mysticism thrown in. The thirty-year-old tale has aged remarkably well, and it's worth the effort to sort out who's doing and saying what to whom. The strong male and female leads add depth and interest, and the good friction between them keeps the story engaging. There are also many emotional hooks that draw the reader in and keep them invested in the characters' fates.
“There’re places of power. You have to help make them … be in the right place at the right time and know it. By dreaming about it but not thinking about it.” The concept of places of power adds an element of mystery and wonder to the story. The tangled time lines can be confusing at times, but the origami plot structure keeps the reader close to Richard’s consciousness and leaves them wondering about Maggie. Just when you think the plot thread written in present tense is the main one, it isn't, adding an element of surprise and keeping the reader on their toes.
“All the while telling each other and yourself that the good times are coming, and then everything falls to pieces and you’re just waiting to die.” The wry humor in both the telling and the dialogue adds a light touch to what could otherwise be a heavy and depressing story. The time-appropriate jargon helps to pull the reader into that time and place, especially since America in the 1940s through 1980s is ancient history to many current readers. However, there are a few quibbles. For example, an F-104 can’t fly from Pensacola, FL to Homestead AFB, FL in ten minutes, and an F-104 lights its afterburner at brake release, not rotation. Additionally, the USAF anti-satellite missile (ASM-135) was not borne by the F-16; there wasn't enough power. Nevertheless, these minor flaws do not detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
“To write something you have to have something to say.” This statement rings true for this story, which has a lot to say about power, fate, and the human condition. “Even places of power are useless unless you’re prepared to bring something to them.” This final thought leaves the reader with something to ponder long after the story has ended.