After a few months of absence from the site, it's time to get a little active. A good horror, there's nothing (the ending of the novel is atypical for Simmons). A lot of ink has been spent on descriptions of the demonic hordes that inhabit the small, and until then peaceful Elm Haven. A group of friends is in the spotlight, they have stood on the heels of the slaves of darkness, and they will be the only hope for their fellow citizens. The action takes place quickly, somewhat thrillingly, and the finale as well, and that's why I didn't really like the novel. Nevertheless, the horror and fantasy elements of the novel are at a high level, as is Dan Simmons' storytelling gift.
Despite my slight dissatisfaction with the overall pacing and conclusion, Simmons' ability to create a vivid and terrifying world is truly remarkable. The detailed descriptions of the demonic hordes and the menacing atmosphere of Elm Haven add to the overall sense of dread. The group of friends, with their unique personalities and strengths, make for an engaging and relatable focal point. While the novel may not have been a perfect fit for my personal tastes, it is still a worthy addition to the horror and fantasy genres.
Overall, I would recommend this novel to fans of the genre who are looking for a well-written and atmospheric read. Simmons' writing style is engaging and his imagination knows no bounds. Although the ending may leave some readers wanting more, the journey through the pages of this novel is one that is sure to keep you on the edge of your seat.
(This was a goodreads give-away.)
I was extremely excited when I received this book. I had never delved into any of Simmons' work before, but upon glancing at the back cover, I was truly impressed. Hugo Award. World Fantasy Award. Bram Stoker Award. Shirley Jackson Award. NYT bestsellers. It seemed like a literary powerhouse.
And since this is a reprinting, I naively thought there wouldn't be any of those bothersome little issues that stem from sloppy editing.
Oh Wow!
I cracked it open, eagerly anticipating being Scared with a capital S.
However, to my great disappointment, I ended up being Bored with a capital B.
Not only that, but I was also Irritated with a capital I.
And the list goes on...
Here are some of the so-called "highlights" (or perhaps I should say lowlights).
There are far too many characters introduced simultaneously, with little or nothing to set them apart until much later in the story. Simmons further confounds the reader by referring to them sometimes by their first names and at other times by their last names.
At nearly 500 pages, the book is a good 300 pages too long. (In fact, it feels like it's 500 pages too long.)
There's very little of a coherent story happening - mainly just one gross-out scene after another. (Not that there's anything inherently wrong with gross-out scenes, but it would be nice to have at least a modicum of plot to hold them together.)
One character, Cordie, only seems to make an appearance when Simmons has painted himself into a corner. She has about as much depth as a puddle on a rainy day. Oh yeah, and a 10-year-old girl walking around a small town carrying a loaded shotgun and leading two vicious dogs would surely raise more than a few eyebrows.
Not one of the boys, except the leader, seems to possess a functioning brain. They simply do as they are told. They never question. They never come up with any original ideas of their own. I have no idea what alternate reality this is supposed to take place in, but in my experience, 10-year-old boys are anything but the most cooperative of beings!
Apparently, the editor couldn't be bothered to slog through the text either. At one point, there's the sentence "An ax lay blackened and half-buried in the ashes of the fire." A mere 21 lines later, there's "A single ax lay charred and blackened in the campfire ashes."
There's more. More shoddy writing. More editing mistakes. More lack of character development. More flimsy plotting. More, more, more. But unlike Simmons, I'm not going to bore you with all the tiresome details.