It still astonishes me that Joyce's work outside of his fiction was of such mediocrity. There are indeed some pleasant snippets of dialog within it. However, when considering the whole, it becomes evident that this would have been more effectively presented as a short story. I find it quite challenging to envision actors actually uttering this dialog with authenticity and conviction.
The lackluster nature of Joyce's non-fiction work stands in stark contrast to the brilliance of his fictional creations. While the dialog may have had its moments, it fails to come together in a way that would engage and captivate an audience in a more substantial form. As a short story, the精华 of the dialog could have been distilled and presented in a more concise and impactful manner.
Perhaps Joyce was simply more at home in the realm of fiction, where he could let his imagination run wild and create complex and vivid worlds. In this non-fiction work, it seems as though he was somewhat constrained, and the result is a piece that falls short of his usual high standards.
James Joyce's only play, "Exiles," is a rather lackluster affair. If I died this moment, I am yours. The play is filled with four characters who all seem to blend together in their anguished, neurotic, conflicted, and over-wrought states. I have wounded my soul for you — a deep wound of doubt that can never be healed. The four main characters struggle with overlapping attractions and bouts of indifference. What might have seemed modern in 1916 now comes across as dealing with concepts like open marriage, polyamorous inclinations, and "swinging," but without the proper language to discuss them openly at the time. Jealousy and monogamy are the dominant emotions, and nothing else seems to exist. The ideas are in their infancy, struggling to emerge, and the process is both cryptic and painful, ultimately leading to nothing but pain. I have rarely been so dreadfully bored, which is why it only earns two stars.
Disliked for its awkward dialogue, convoluted philosophical fixations, and shoddy portrayal of characters, this work seems much more interesting to me than I'd been led to expect. It would seem that it suffers unfairly by comparison to its antecedents and successors. While Joyce put out Dubliners and Portrait in '14 and '16 respectively, the former was completed nearly a decade prior and the latter was merely a reshaping of even earlier sketches. This leaves Exiles as the first real expression of the older, maturer Joyce that begins Ulysses.
No surprise, then, that family life, private ennui, and psychopyrotechnics about cuckoldry are the main points. Given that Ulysses would take years more to complete, it's even less a surprise that his conclusions are much foggier, improfound, and dubious. Being something written after his initial success, after years of resigning himself to hopelessness and failure, there may be something of an cockiness leading him to the over-confident assertions in this small play. Consequently, in his network, Ezra Pound wrote article after article trying and failing to find something he liked in it, while Yeats simply said that nobody would want to watch it.
Anyways, the plot is a bizarre-o love square about parallel infidelities (one real, one spiritual), presented with detached and hyper-analytical characters that resemble the soulless hypermoderns in Goethe's Elective Affinities more than anything. It ends on the expected note of material felicity but psychological resignation. His method seems to be following the Ibsenite formula, where a group of fully realized characters are shown at a 'breaking point' in their lives which allows for their speeches and acts to become prophet-like and monstrously symbolic. And indeed, Joyce tries to give them small mannerisms, little vanities, and fallacious beliefs, to further instill the realism that his Dubliners all had. This much isn't really successful, since the characters are either fully unreal, or sufficiently alienated that their resemblance to normal people is entirely defunct.
This gets irritating for a moment, but Joyce's aim here pans out to be less of a regional portrait or psycho-mythological adventure as his previous two books had been, and instead a sort of existential geometry about the characters as they're presented. The characters argue their incredibly parapraxis-ridden justifications of their (either initiating, or permitting) infidelity in terms of a Schoepenhauerian philosophy that, taken on its own, is entirely laughable and seems like something Joyce would have given to one of his parodies of bad writers. But something here seems to me to connect, not on a prima-facie basis but rather on the basis of detachment from the stage. The irrational conclusions (because I have allowed you to cheat on me, I have given you freedom, which consequently binds you permanently to me) appear as phantom deductions from within a fever dream of romantic claustrophobia. The success of this Will-oriented philosophy of human relations seems to be less a serious assertion on Joyce's part and more a taken-up framework whereby he can set his characters into an intricate game against one another for apparently little sake other than to study what we feel about the conclusion. And while his self-insert wins the 'chess match', it's unclear to the reader what this victory signifies, and the weight of that ambiguity seems to me to bear a non-trivial resemblance to the dark conclusions of the Dubliner tales.
Of course, that this all works out to a summary of "this is proxy therapy for an insecure and unhappy Joyce" makes the enjoyability of Exiles pretty variable for the reader, depending on their level of investment on Joyce biography or their disposition to entertaining psycho-fantasies of this kind. As a first step towards the degree of symbolic significance that cuckoldry and its consequences would take on in Ulysses, this is definitely a productive scholarly consultation. It's also incidentally interesting that Joyce, having decided on cuckoldry as his central theme after a false-alarm scare with Nora Barnacle, decided to give his self-insert a spiritual mistress of his own to compensate for the cuckoldry Richard Rowan receives here. Some years later down the road, while writing the chapter 'Nausicaa' in which Bloom imagines an infidelity of his own, Joyce made several attempts to commit infidelity purely for research purposes, but could never bring himself to actually consummate any of these brief (and awkward) affairs. The closest he got was with a Jewish girl who, upon finally getting her alone and lusty with him in a bedroom, suddenly declared that they could only be Platonic friends and also would only communicate by mail, and achieved a sort of spiritual infidelity via letters for solely literary-inspirational purposes, which turns out to be almost exactly the same dynamic Richard achieves with his piano-playing lady friend.