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This story is about a historian who travels back in time to ancient Pompeii, where she is immediately captured and sold into slavery. Because she can read and write, she becomes valuable to her household. Though she possesses the means to return to her own time, she lingers because she falls in love with her master.
While this was an enjoyable story, I have to admit the main character, Miranda, read like a Mary Sue. That is, she seemed to possess superhuman abilities at times ~ indefatigable, personable beyond belief, always in the right place at the right time. Though Latin is a dead language in our time, she has no problem not only speaking and reading it but also understanding the people she meets, despite the fact that they would've spoken dialects she may not have known. Everyone loved her and this was a cute little adventure she was on in her quest to find "true love."
However, as a reader I have issues with the thought that a slave of any stature can find "true love" with the master who owns them. Too many variables exist in such a relationship to make me believe love can be consensual between unequal individuals. While perhaps Miranda did feel love toward her master Tullius (she was, after all, born in our time and didn't consider herself anyone's slave), he would've seen her as merely a possession and the story wasn't strong enough to support the argument that he loved her any more than he did anything else he owned.
I did like the nice twist with Demetrius' character and why he went to the lengths he did for Tullius, but that wasn't the focus of the story so it mattered little in the grand scheme of things. I also enjoyed a look at life in Pompeii (this story takes place 17 years before the infamous eruption of Mount Vesuvius, though there are foreshadowing occurrences which hint at what's coming). This was innovative, as most stories I've read which are set in Pompeii revolve around the explosion and little else.
The historical aspects of the story were well researched and presented in a way that doesn't hinder the characters or the plot. I just wish Miranda was a little more ... average, I guess would be the best word to use. Still, this is a quick read I think most readers would enjoy.
While this was an enjoyable story, I have to admit the main character, Miranda, read like a Mary Sue. That is, she seemed to possess superhuman abilities at times ~ indefatigable, personable beyond belief, always in the right place at the right time. Though Latin is a dead language in our time, she has no problem not only speaking and reading it but also understanding the people she meets, despite the fact that they would've spoken dialects she may not have known. Everyone loved her and this was a cute little adventure she was on in her quest to find "true love."
However, as a reader I have issues with the thought that a slave of any stature can find "true love" with the master who owns them. Too many variables exist in such a relationship to make me believe love can be consensual between unequal individuals. While perhaps Miranda did feel love toward her master Tullius (she was, after all, born in our time and didn't consider herself anyone's slave), he would've seen her as merely a possession and the story wasn't strong enough to support the argument that he loved her any more than he did anything else he owned.
I did like the nice twist with Demetrius' character and why he went to the lengths he did for Tullius, but that wasn't the focus of the story so it mattered little in the grand scheme of things. I also enjoyed a look at life in Pompeii (this story takes place 17 years before the infamous eruption of Mount Vesuvius, though there are foreshadowing occurrences which hint at what's coming). This was innovative, as most stories I've read which are set in Pompeii revolve around the explosion and little else.
The historical aspects of the story were well researched and presented in a way that doesn't hinder the characters or the plot. I just wish Miranda was a little more ... average, I guess would be the best word to use. Still, this is a quick read I think most readers would enjoy.