This is an extremely good work. I have added it to my favorites. However, I refrained from giving it a full 5 stars. There were some odd pieces that seemed a bit unnecessary. Also, while I really enjoyed reading the "Tarpaulin" language, at times it was rather difficult to follow certain bits and pieces and to precisely understand what was being said. It does add to the overall feel of the story, but it also made for not so easy reading at times.
Forget about the protagonist! I found myself absolutely loving First Lieutenant Charles Summers! What a wonderful man he is. He truly shone in the second and third books. There was really a kind of "bromance" going on between him and Edmund. I really felt a lot for him at times. If only William Golding had written a novel with Charles Summers as the lead! Sigh. It would have been amazing.