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good
but I know neal stephenson for being long winded, thats not true here.
which I think is fine as we have gained a good pace here and there is a good amount of action and fluff that was cut out for the better. Just great use of not covering the obvious no matter how exciting it is.
IDK how to explain that but so many books would include generic scenes for the sake of continuity but here its cut for the better.
BUT
there are about 3 instances that could have used more
1 - the tech could have used the deep dive I have expected from this author
2 - more explanation of a character relation or two
3 - the simplicity of the conspiracy could have used a deeper dive
but I know neal stephenson for being long winded, thats not true here.
which I think is fine as we have gained a good pace here and there is a good amount of action and fluff that was cut out for the better. Just great use of not covering the obvious no matter how exciting it is.
IDK how to explain that but so many books would include generic scenes for the sake of continuity but here its cut for the better.
BUT
there are about 3 instances that could have used more
1 - the tech could have used the deep dive I have expected from this author
2 - more explanation of a character relation or two
3 - the simplicity of the conspiracy could have used a deeper dive