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Gore Vidal certainly knew his ancient history. That said, I've read enough of him to conclude that while he could craft somewhat immersive historical fiction, he had trouble making it compelling.
Creation begins with the protagonist talking about how wrong Herodotus is, but Herodotus is heavily used (and often bolstered) by this work, or is occasionally subverted in the most superficial way of "Greeks bad, Persians good," or perhaps "what the Greeks considered important, the Persians considered unimportant." A chronicling of the Persian Wars from the Persian POV is a great idea in theory, but that's not really what we get here, despite this introduction--the protagonist doesn't particularly care about the Greeks, and Vidal refuses to go significantly beyond the standard Greek sources.
So what IS the novel about? Well, it's important to note that there isn't much plot to this novel. Perhaps Vidal thought it would seem more authentic this way, as it does read more like the dim recollections of an old man, but this authenticity is heavily undermined by the constant feeling that the protagonists' travels are contrived just so he can converse with the important religious leaders of several Eastern religions. Much of the novel sits the protagonist down to talk to Confucius, the Buddha, Mahavira, etc so he can compare his Zoroastrian beliefs to theirs. This is potentially fine, but this is really all that the novel has to offer. The narrative whisks the protagonist in, he waits around for awhile, theological discussions commence, and then the protagonist runs back to Persia.
Overall, this is an impressively-researched work, but it feels twice as long as it is because so little is happening, and the protagonist's narrative meanders around too much to preserve much tension.
Creation begins with the protagonist talking about how wrong Herodotus is, but Herodotus is heavily used (and often bolstered) by this work, or is occasionally subverted in the most superficial way of "Greeks bad, Persians good," or perhaps "what the Greeks considered important, the Persians considered unimportant." A chronicling of the Persian Wars from the Persian POV is a great idea in theory, but that's not really what we get here, despite this introduction--the protagonist doesn't particularly care about the Greeks, and Vidal refuses to go significantly beyond the standard Greek sources.
So what IS the novel about? Well, it's important to note that there isn't much plot to this novel. Perhaps Vidal thought it would seem more authentic this way, as it does read more like the dim recollections of an old man, but this authenticity is heavily undermined by the constant feeling that the protagonists' travels are contrived just so he can converse with the important religious leaders of several Eastern religions. Much of the novel sits the protagonist down to talk to Confucius, the Buddha, Mahavira, etc so he can compare his Zoroastrian beliefs to theirs. This is potentially fine, but this is really all that the novel has to offer. The narrative whisks the protagonist in, he waits around for awhile, theological discussions commence, and then the protagonist runs back to Persia.
Overall, this is an impressively-researched work, but it feels twice as long as it is because so little is happening, and the protagonist's narrative meanders around too much to preserve much tension.